by metooiseeyou
I enjoyed this - it is erotic without him or her having absurd attributes. There is deep fondness between them but not romantic love, so that the aunt's appearance in a triangle is not so 'unfaithful.' I am still not sure about that.
The past tense of 'grind' is 'ground,' never grinded.
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Hoping to hear more about him impregnating his mom and aunt multiple times…
In my opinion, you are a gifted and very talented writer. I loved your storyline and your gentle, but still very arousing style of writing. More than 5 stars. Please continue… and thanks a lot.
Mmm luv to hear how he breeds his aunt with mums help .. then taking care of pregnant desires ..Penny
5 stars. Nicely done, great hook holding out until the end about his aunt. Keep writing!!!
very talented writing, easy to follow and understand this situation with a mother and son so close together, with the inevitable happening. I'd give this a ten vote easily....
Wonderful story. Can't wait for the next chapter if there will be one . definitely a 5🌟
As a naturist (the preferred nomenclature in the UK), I am torn with the use of nudism/naturism as the theme of sex stories. It perpetuates the notion that nudity is synonymous with sex and that is the very antithesis of nudism/naturism. That said, nudists/naturists do have sex, although our nudity isn't the driver of our desires, so why shouldn't there be sex stories with that theme. In this story, the protagonists are completely new to nudism and don't know the etiquette expected of true nudists, so it's better than some of the stories I've read, where the protagonists were supposed to be experienced nudists.
Like story I did samething to my mom and aunt moms sister we are living together us three sleep in same bed king size between both woman they each three kids I put inside them now my aunts oldest daughter my cousin and my own sister have joined us I knocked both of them up too told four woman since this staying like this told them my friends want have orgy with you four and want to breed you too said going be double penetration each of you even said want your cunts to stay hairy
Remek történet és sok más olvasóhoz hasonlóan várom a történet folytatását, főleg , hogy Peg néninek is kell a baba.
Giving it a generous 4 stars in spite of a lack of simple proofreading. The concept and general tone of the relationship mostly worked. Two things I never like is an unfinished story that leaves the reader dangling possibly forever. Secondly, the too common use of anal play in a brand new sexual partnership as if it's equally customary on a first date like dinner or a movie. That only happens in badly crafted online porn. You handled the mom's willingness to get pregnant pretty well and resisted most other trashy memes in the category. Well done.
Why did you randomly switch to present tense in the middle of the story? Get a proofreader.
The word Mother appears 137 times in this story ,sometimes it appears 4 times in one paragraph. We all know its a mother son story, totally spoiled it for me
I had to stop reading because of the odd over usage of the word mother. Was this intentional, and intended to elicit some response, or was it simply missed in proofreading?
Oh damn this was hot. Reminds me of the fauxcest series in which a mother and son start a relationship. The mom is the only one of her siblings with kids. So she decides to enlist her son as a donor to her two sisters. By the end they are all one harem of pregnant milfs mom included.
Oh yeah please provide more chapters. This was freaking hot!!!
Aw, come on, continue this story. Did he get his aunt pregnant? Inquiring minds want to know. Please continue this story.
A very well written story , i like it enough for 5 stars , more excitement to come i'm sure .
Loved the story.
Would love too read more.
Glad he's helping his aunt hopefully be able to get pregnant too.