All Comments on 'First Time with Another Man's Wife'

G ood story, need more depth and length. Please follow up with sequel.

At least a hint of originality. I think it could have been more extensive with a little flirting when she visited the store. I debated between 3&4 and finally decided on the 4*.

very well done

BARF

Skip the blowjob and give her the full load in her pussy.

Never had a job like that. One was close when I worked security / maintenance for a 175-room hotel. Some of the stories I could tell if I were an author. Maybe someday. 4-stars and thank you.

That was hot.

I hate it when that happens.

Only a real asshole would do this

FANTASTIC, more please

Nice fantasy. It needs expanding, a series of sequels would be welcome

You need to add more chapters. Good writing. How about they fuck in the store without the old man knowing that they did it. Maybe he knocks her up and the old man loves it. He dies and she keeps him as her boy toy. There are lots of ideas you can do to make this a great series.

More! You have an excellent style, not the normal "She said", "I said" awkward styles so many others have. Continue on... she calls for him to stop work and come take care of her needs, or Raymond is asked to perform felatio on the Old Man while the wife watches (or participates), or the wife pegs Raymond, or they throw a party and Raymond is asked to service the guests, or . . . . . . .

Was it the last time? How lucky you were to be chosen, wow some people have some great stuff handed to them in life, haha