All Comments on 'Fishing Trip'

Longest story yet, Em. I can’t believe how much hotness you fitted in to it. A kitchen sink story. And I mean that in a good way. PK

Utter hokum in places, but well-written hokum, I’ll give you that. A

@PrettyAmelia - is that grudging approval, Amy 😉? Em

@PeterKimi - thank you. Nice to know that a few people look forward to the next story. Em

You and your stories are smoking hot. I plan to read any and everything you write!

@Anonymous - thank you so much. I appreciate the feedback. Em

This is so fucking hot. But the banter is where it really shines. I couldn't get enough of it.

@djrip - thanks, hun. Not hard to write about Amy being sexy TBH. I’m currently writing a story about her being kind, now that is more of a challenge 😬. We flight like siblings, but are as close as sisters. Em

Fantastical. A longer episode that just flew by with amazing hotness. Love the detail (having one's cock spat/drooled/hocked on is unbeatable!), the budding camaraderie and the chat between the three characters.

Oh yes, and olive oil is probably the best substance known to man or woman, right? :)

@Anon - so glad you liked it - my style was a bit uneven back then. But it still has a certain something. Em

Well. Well well well well well. That hit nearly every kink I needed hit. To the point that I would read this WHILE being fucked and just… keep cumming… New fav to read again and again.

@EStaccato. - jinx! I just commented pretty much the same thing on This May End Badly - and before I read this 😬. Em

The dialogue between the characters really makes this jump off the page. Every detail is done to perfection and written in such a way that you can FEEL yourself being there. Really well written, thanks

@JJ882490 - thank you. A very early story and written with some unevenness of style and poor technique. But glimpses of something better, I agree 😊. Emily