All Comments on 'Fishing with My Father Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Yes. You're becoming a slut. A big one.

wobbiltywobbiltywobbiltywobbiltyalmost 3 years ago

I think your prose could use some work, but I can't deny that I think this story is really hot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Story better than most, but not real imaginative. How about next episode Mom join in with the girls and dad,

englishnospeakenglishnospeakover 2 years ago

wow could have been a 5/5 story but no, the sex was way too rushed... 1/5

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I like to write stories where there is a somewhat realistic approach to situations my characters get themselves in too. They often start out teasing and then grow bolder over time.

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