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Click here"So do I!" Andrea quickly said interrupting mom. "I've never came so many times in one night, and I thought my husband knew how to fuck!"
Even as I thought of our future fucking adventures my eyelids closed and I began to snore.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous8 months agoI'll be so glad when I'm done with the last of dezurtdawg's stories (just a couple left to check out that interested me based on the description). But damn if it isn't the same bullshit clichés in them all. Huge cocks, annoying characters with the same characteristics and behaviours, predictable disappointing arcs. Come on man, change it up a little.
So I'm guessing Becky got scared when she felt how big he was, and instead of acting like a rational adult and talking about it, she behaved like a complete bitch and ran away, making him feel like total trash. Now while I'm not saying it's entirely implausible, there was a better way to handle that as a writer that doesn't make us hate her a bit. But maybe you like antagonizing us :)
And I know you mentioned it at the start, but honestly the slurred speech is just stupid. They're not that drunk and even if they are, we don't need to feel like we are to read what they're saying.
The mother is really in the background squeezing out shits, really? She must have digested some of the author's worst stories earlier that day. I swear this author is just some horny teenager writing out his twisted fantasies with no idea how to craft a real compelling story without so much bullshit woven into it. I've yet to read one of his stories that hasn't made me roll my eyeballs and say "really?" several times throughout it.
Anonymous8 months agoI’d love more! I thought mom was going to clean out sis… so much possibility here!
BassNutt51over 1 year agoWow, a few honest critiques with actual names, congrats. Another great tale that we all can relate to, a little not being hung like that but being left high and dry. Having an outlet like sis and mom even makes it hotter. After mom was in the can, I thought for sure that he was going to get her ass and give her a seminal enema, lol. Thanks for writing it's much appreciated 😊👍
becker92548almost 4 years agoPlz continue as mother and daughter 69 while Mark fucked one of them.
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoDid we need to hear about mom taking a crap? I don’t think it’s really Germaine to the story!
RodThrustinover 5 years agoIn one of my novels I have the heroine getting drunk (while she describes her rape years before to her lover) and I used just one example of her drunk slurring, but explained that I would describe the rest of the conversation in normal speech. It seemed to work.
Good story. You got a fin from me.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agodezurtdawg here!
Hi guys n gals, just a quick note to let all of you know a few things.
First of all, I AM NOT DEAD........YET!
Besides my writer's block, my ticker started acting up a few years back and after way too many trips to the doctor they figured it out and prescribed meds to help with it. (My arteries are clean, just a non-correctable low expulsion factor. IF you know what that means you have my sympathy.) So I bounced from good days to bad days and the doctor helped to exacerbate that problem with constant changes to my meds. Shit!
Finally had a pacemaker implanted and, that, along with different meds seems to have stabilized things for me. So I've been slowly working on my long dormant stories. Unfortunately, while all of this went on I have forgotten my password to get onto my author's page to upload new stories that I have ready. Every time I ask for the reset password code it turns out that it won't work and thus far the help people here have been NO HELP!
So anyway, wish me luck at getting that fixed. I will try to add this note to all of my stories, or at least the last part for those that are series. Take care, all of you, and don't forget to vote!
dezurtdawg
One_Lone_Wolfalmost 7 years agoYou are evedintly to stupid to comprehend what you read he only fuck her ass once where he came in her vagina at least twice so how is it anal and as to it being in wrong category last time I checked fucking your mother and sister was incest I meae I know that the kids to day as a majority are being dumbed down but being on this site I would tend to think that you would be a little older but hey I guess there was a few people in every generation that got beat with the stupid stick now to the arthur great story loved it five stars from me
Anonymousover 7 years agoGave this a 1 star for being in the wrong category. This should have been posted under the ANAL category.
The old fart
