by wose
Great story! Really enjoyed the submission from Danni. You accidentally pasted the text twice though, fyi
The story somehow turned into nonsense, then I noticed it was repeating itself from the beginning, and not knowing if I was at the end continued to read all over again. I would have given 5 stars, as the story was incredibly hot, but the typos and repeating kind of ruined the flow of an otherwise sexy story. But you definitely have the writing skills. Thanks for sharing
Printing errors be damned, I liked the story and would look forward to another chapter.
She claims that Danni and Hugh are the two people that she loves more than anyone else in this world. But yet she makes them use a condom. Danni is her BFF and she makes her get tested for STDs? What is otherwise a good hot story gets ruined by unnecessary bullshit. 😒 I understand the thing with no kissing because she's trying hard to keep this "just a fuck" so that she is the only one making love to her husband. But if I were Hugh, I would tell her to take her fucking rules and shove them up her ass before returning to the porn and jacking off. Your price is way too high, bitch. 2/5