All Comments on 'Fixing Jacob'

by Grendel22

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Too long

Too long

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 3 years ago
Brilliant Grandmother, loving mother

So many sons would benefit from honest uninhibited help. Sexual self esteem is so fragile at that age.

live4thebjlive4thebjover 3 years ago
Too clinical

Just too clinical for me. **

daylilygardenerdaylilygardenerover 3 years ago
Great Beginning Chapter

Can't wait for the next chapter. Also, maybe at some point, grandma can join in the fix?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
TOO FUNNY!

Mommy didn't mind her son being a Boy Whore, because she was liberal. Does that mean liberals are scum?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Leave it as such..

Grendel.. don't redo anything.. Just keep writing chapters and chapters if him and mom and his "pussy hammer" destroying mom's pussy.. then maybe bring grandma and her sister into this.. but first.. a chapter of ONLY him and mom fucking.. yes FUCK ing.. over and over..

kingswedekingswedeover 3 years ago
Fantastic

This is a great story line.

I can see it going on for many a chapters.

Grandma can even “cum” and join in the “training.”

I bet his mothers sister would love to ride the “love pole” also.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Another great Story line

As with the other series, this is a great story line. It has some common elements that are always a hit: a hesitant mother that turns into an insatiably incestuous creatures and a horny son that takes advantage of the whole situation.

In this case, the pusher is the grandmother instead of the dr. But The grandma has something in common with The Virus grandmother in her past history of incest and promiscuity.

Please keep your great writing up! THank you

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 3 years ago

Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter! Five stars and a favorite point!

jsmangisjsmangisover 3 years ago

I really enjoyed this story and will be waiting patiently for more chapters. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

We need part 2!

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 3 years ago

Wow.

I could say so much more, but I won't. Except to say, I hope there is more, and soon.

grayge37grayge37over 3 years ago

Just "stumbled" on your story and am glad I did! This was so hot and seems to be leading the reader onward toward more of the mother/son relationship. Anxiously am now looking forward to reading the next chapter. Five stars!

Markus1956Markus1956almost 3 years ago

geiles Lese-Erlebnis !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Good premise.

But the sex is almost boring. No details. None at all. Nothing about exactly how she stroked him. Nothing about touching/feeling/playing with his balls.

No dialog about how her cock manipulation felt. To him. To her. No indication that she slowed down to make it/him last longer.

Three stars.

walkindatdogwalkindatdog9 months ago

A couple of paragraphs in and i knew i'd read this one before. I remember really liking it! This first chapter brings it all back- the pussy hammer. HAH! -the Sherman's march through grandma's bridge club(!). That line is about the best one i've ever read on Literotica! Soooooo fucking funny! The negative comments above are exceedingly DAFT! You want more of the nuances of the hand jobs? There's just no pleasing some people. I think you describe it all just fine. I seem to remember the term 'pussy hammer' being used a lot in future chapters- it so hammers home the virility of this future stud of a son. This should be a blast the 2nd time through, too! Thanks ever so much for Sherman's march as i'm sure the bridge club has never been the same. Grandma gets her own 5 stars, as do mother and son. Yippee! I'm so glad to have found this gem again. Thanks for writing

oksideshow859419oksideshow8594197 months ago

I'm excited to read more

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I was pretty young, but the first porno I ever saw was Taboo II. It definitely had an effect on me. I though the sister was hot as hell, but it was really Honey Wilder that just did it for me. And then I saw the first Taboo and the third. The thought of having an older wom...

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