All Comments on 'Fixing the Neighbor Ch. 03'

please tell us there is another chapter on the way???????????????

... on! it's too hot! don't let me wait!

But now you need a Ch. 4

Great first and second chapters, complete dud of a third.

Not sure what annon was looking for but this was a great chapter in the evolving relationship of the main characters. Keep it going.

I liked this chapter of the story. It was very erotic, good detail and I love that Spaldan shows the characters emotions as well as the physical responses. This story was indeed a turn on. I'm looking forward to what is next. I don't understand what the turn on is to cum on women's faces. Maybe it's a guy thing?

the odd americanism confusion of lay/lie, superfluous use of ´ofs´; cumming outside of orifices makes no sense to me - i'm an always inside cumming guy - that's the point of having my cock inside a woman. i wouldn't let myself be influenced by video porn in my writing. thanks.

Good series, although the rapey beginning almost made me stop. The last chapter felt a bit confused as Nikki became a background player, and it felt odd.