All Comments on 'Flame Trees Ch. 02a'

Love the story, it is well written . AAAAAA++++++

Loved the story. It will be interesting to see the alternate version.

Cheers

SAGE

Well written, but I definitely fell in the camp of unneeded for me

It was like a fairytale story. I loved it

A little disappointed as it was mostly non-stop sex and very little story. Glad Mum was included though.

No need for an alternative version.

That was a good story.

What higher praise could an Author ask for?

That was a good story. I enjoyed the reading.

Very happy to read this sequel, US, thank you!

... looking forward to you regaling us with the alternate....

I'll read 2b, but can't imagine it will surpass this version. I do want to point out that you are one of the best in writing an epilogue that doesn't leave me screaming at the computer screen. That's for sharing a piece of your time. 5*

between the Jacaranda and the Brachychiton not to sure which I find more appealing. both very pretty however the Brachychiton pods are very itchy when you come in contact with them.

Very much loved this work.

As outstanding as ever and thoroughly enjoyable. Looking forward to the next of your amazing stories.

I did enjoy it, thank you, not quite as much as chapter 1, but much more than I expected, as I am one of those who didn't initially like the mother dimension. It's not worth a full 5 but I couldn't't give it less as it is way too good for 4.

Very nice!

Another great story and I enjoyed it very much. Look forward to whatever you bring out next.

I had to go back to read part 1 before reading this one. I like the way you ended this one. I’m looking forward to the next ending. Thanks.

Don't feel the first one needed a sequel, that said I liked the addition of the mom but felt the "Hayley is nuts" bit was unnecessary. Would have made more sense for all three of them to move to a new area instead of staying in a town where the mom was established before.

Well written and done after the two parts. Full of feeling and the thought processes he had. The only change I would contemplate would be a more detailed physical description of the mom and daughter, but it was definitely a five star story arc.

It was ok though I get bored with too much sex and mother and son sex has never been my favourite coupling . But you do write well and your storytelling skills are way up there.

A satisfying conclusion to a heart-felt story. Well done, as usual. 5/5*

big mistake dragging the mom in, ruined it.

I say it does not need another version. Great the way it is.

Simply beautiful. I was wary about the mother joining but honestly the way it was handled was just right. Mark and Amy had their wonderful family and are still on their journey. This ending is perfect in my opinion, though I will still read the other ending if and when it releases. 5 stars and a couple of tears of joy :) Thank you so much for this. Highlight of my week.

Always enjoy your stories but this one needs a little editing. Certainly a great story though.

Loved this series and you built it up so well just wish mum could have gotten pregnant also 5 stars !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Pregnancy ruined it. Also, what happened to the promised anal with mom and sis?

I absolutely loved the whole two stories. This would be a perfect place to end it. How can you get any better than - "and they lived happily ever after".

If only the promised and teased anal scenes had actually happened this would have been a 5/5 instead you get a 2-

Excellent ending to a good and very well told story!