All Comments on 'Flame Trees'

I say add Mom. There are many men in this world who have more than one wife. Mom seems to want it and sister says she would support it. A family threesome could add excitement.

I know you have a lot of irons in the fire but this story deserves a sequel and conclusion with Mom and babies included. You set it up so well. Next time don't let him overthink things so long though, it closely bordered on annoying.

Mark's father was a real bastard for downsizing and kicking him out!! A bastard parent!!

Whore around Hayley....enough said!!

Leave it at brother and sister!!

Adding their mother would be a fucking disaster!!

I LOVED IT AND BY ALL MEANS ADD MUM...CINCO ESTRELLAS!

Please please continue this story. Mom has to get involved, there's always enough room and love for everyone.

We need more of this trio

You are one of my favorite authors, however, you lost me halfway into the second page. Sorry, but I will not be giving a rating as I don't want to counter those that like this story.

This is a totally hot brother/sister story but the hottest part was when Mark was holding his Mother while she had her panties around her ankles and masturbating at the kitchen counter. Can't get that vision out of my mind cause it's such a turn on. Five stars and it would be a shame to leave Mum out of the next chapter.

Lots of opinions, and yes I have one. But the story is yours, write it as you wish, do what you want, but do carry on...

For me, this is one of, if not, the best incest stories I've read. I especially liked the dialog and progression to Mark and his sister coming together. I really like how understanding their mother is too. More than understanding, the fact that she wants to share the siblings love and closeness warms my heart. 5/5* Fav

incest is hot when it's a secret, and just two people. The second you start opening it up to harem bullshit, it gets repetitive, far from believable or even interesting.

You know a story is good when you feel strong emotions. And this certainly evoked those from me. The second I read that Mark was getting off early to surprise his wife, I got this twisting feeling in my stomach and I knew where it was almost certainly leading. Yep, turned out she was a cheating bitch (and later confirmed a bit of a whore, who almost sounded like she was justified in her actions). I felt his betrayal, confusion, loss and pain. Poor guy. Glad he finally found his soulmate in his sister. Haven't read the next chapter yet, but I really hope they mother stays out of it. Tired of these romances getting ruined by adding third wheels. But to each their own I suppose. 5 stars in any case.

Seems to be a lot of controversy about the Mum being added in this story. I for one normally don’t like other families members being added, but in this instance, I feel under the circumstances I don’t mind..⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Loving this story and waiting for mum to join in 5 stars

What in the hell is a ute?????????????????????

... "Ute" is short for Utility Vehicle, like the American Chevy El Camino or Ford Ranchero.

I don’t care much about the mom being added but it was way too soon. They just finally had sex and the next day mom was in the shower with them. Happened too fast considering how long it took mark and Amy to get comfortable together sexually. Kinda ruins the story tbh.

his could turn into a very happy home, life and family.

Great story and very well written. I'm glad you decided to include mom in the mix. That should make for a very erotic part 2 of your story!