by ShelbyDawn57
First one of your stories I've read. Fun, romantic and bittersweet too. I'll be reading more!
Absolutely wonderful! Stories like this, although fictional, are so needed in light of all the bad news around transgender and drag. Thank you so much
You are doing very well, you are now my favourite author for Trans fiction on Lit.
Continue with the feel - good stories I am fed up with too many unfortunate endings.
This is a powerful, heartwarming piece. I love every bit of it. Definitely in my top 10 all time.
Love this story. Now I'm going to read all the other stories you've written.
Shelby. Thank you so much for sharing your remarkable talent with all of us❤️
Great job as always!!
Great job as always! I've said it once i've said it a hundred times you are a word smith. Your stories always get me where I need to be 😉😉😉😉
Excellent as always. Your ability to bring the characters to life and make us care about them is amazing! It’s a true talent to be able to bring emotional depth to a short story, bravo
Great story! There were a couple of spots where I think a name got mixed up, I imagine a quick editorial read through would catch the error, but other than that I loved it!
Thanks for sharing your talent!
Fantastic story, as always. I love that your stories are sweet and sexy and upbeat.
An incredibly wonderful story. The pace could be a bit slower and some more details would be great. But regardless ot was so beautiful that a few times my eyes just watered up. Can't wait for more. Keep up the good work :)
Wonderful story, yet again, ShelbyDawn57! I love the twists and turns and the genuine emotion and love that can be felt between Jackie & Ash, and all the girls from Miki’s world, just from the words you put on paper (figuratively, of course). 🥰
Sometimes you need help learning and becoming who you truly are. Great story
I have read several of your stories, you have a great way of drawing people in. Your character development is outstanding. I really enjoyed the story.
It will depend entirely on my current mood as to my motivation on any particular day for reading this again!
It feels like an extra-kinky, extremely well-made, Birdcage-adjacent work of adult literature.
Great story. I loved the whole thing. Very well written. If your other stories are half this good I will have to read them all.
Wonderful story both with the transformation and the justice to her abusers.
I loved it when evil family got their comeuppance! If you wouldn't mind, I'd love a followup on where Jackie and Ash go from here.
Addictive story to be finally reading in one setting!
Well crafted!
A few places to be proofed and re-edited but most people would never notice them!
Other than that great work!
Georgia.... :>)
Simply loved reading this as I never can understand why people are so aggressive as to how we dress . Beautifully crafted from start to finish xxx
In these dark times it is just wonderful to have your stories to fall back upon 🥰
the best story i have read in a long time what a great author so well done thank you.
First, a massive heart felt thank you for this and all your other wonderful stories. This one is on of my favorites on this site, one I have come back to many times - and I always end up a little misty eyed at the end. You are a gifted writer, m'lady.
. . . . < Martina > . . . .
Beautiful and heart warming story. I want to live in that reality. I only cried in 5 different spots, ha, but each time brought a warmth of love for our fellow inhabitants of this world. I needed this story today. Thank you so much for taking the time to put it to 'paper'. xo