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CriosCriosabout 1 year ago

First one of your stories I've read. Fun, romantic and bittersweet too. I'll be reading more!

CaseyjoCaseyjoabout 1 year ago

Absolutely wonderful! Stories like this, although fictional, are so needed in light of all the bad news around transgender and drag. Thank you so much

xDarkAngel0xDarkAngel0about 1 year ago

This is the Shelby I love. Fantastic! 5 stars. luv Chloe x

victory8888victory8888about 1 year ago

The story was so well written and it kept me into it loved it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

You are doing very well, you are now my favourite author for Trans fiction on Lit.

Continue with the feel - good stories I am fed up with too many unfortunate endings.

ZBSKRNZBSKRNabout 1 year ago

Thank you for sharing, love your stories

crashmattcrashmattabout 1 year ago

Another fabulous story, thank you!

Femboy_AmandaFemboy_Amandaabout 1 year ago

This is a powerful, heartwarming piece. I love every bit of it. Definitely in my top 10 all time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Love this story. Now I'm going to read all the other stories you've written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Loved it

SavannaShaperSavannaShaperabout 1 year ago

Shelby. Thank you so much for sharing your remarkable talent with all of us❤️

Great job as always!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Great job as always! I've said it once i've said it a hundred times you are a word smith. Your stories always get me where I need to be 😉😉😉😉

EncntctEncntctabout 1 year ago

Excellent as always. Your ability to bring the characters to life and make us care about them is amazing! It’s a true talent to be able to bring emotional depth to a short story, bravo

Chr0nicBi0hazardChr0nicBi0hazardabout 1 year ago

Great story! There were a couple of spots where I think a name got mixed up, I imagine a quick editorial read through would catch the error, but other than that I loved it!

Thanks for sharing your talent!

faxsemmarfaxsemmarabout 1 year ago

Fantastic story, as always. I love that your stories are sweet and sexy and upbeat.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This was an awesome read thank you

DaymosDaymosabout 1 year ago

An incredibly wonderful story. The pace could be a bit slower and some more details would be great. But regardless ot was so beautiful that a few times my eyes just watered up. Can't wait for more. Keep up the good work :)

Raquels_PantiesRaquels_Pantiesabout 1 year ago

Wonderful story, yet again, ShelbyDawn57! I love the twists and turns and the genuine emotion and love that can be felt between Jackie & Ash, and all the girls from Miki’s world, just from the words you put on paper (figuratively, of course). 🥰

buelbuel13buelbuel13about 1 year ago

Wonderful story! Loved it.

Thank you for sharing it!

fimblefimbleabout 1 year ago

Fantastic, one of your best.

CountDiego4CountDiego4about 1 year ago

Absolutely fabulous story.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

First I’ve run across your stories. You have a new fan.

JackiemichelleJackiemichelle12 months ago

Sometimes you need help learning and becoming who you truly are. Great story

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I have read several of your stories, you have a great way of drawing people in. Your character development is outstanding. I really enjoyed the story.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

It will depend entirely on my current mood as to my motivation on any particular day for reading this again!

It feels like an extra-kinky, extremely well-made, Birdcage-adjacent work of adult literature.

lacorsettedlacorsetted11 months ago

Great story. Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

A good job - thank you.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Great story. I loved the whole thing. Very well written. If your other stories are half this good I will have to read them all.

AvidSmutReaderAvidSmutReader10 months ago

Wonderful story both with the transformation and the justice to her abusers.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Loved it! I've started going down the list of your stories and loving them!

MarsPatrolMarsPatrol9 months ago

It’s a magical tale. Thank you

SuddenlyMaddieSuddenlyMaddie8 months ago

I loved it when evil family got their comeuppance! If you wouldn't mind, I'd love a followup on where Jackie and Ash go from here.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Addictive story to be finally reading in one setting!

Well crafted!

A few places to be proofed and re-edited but most people would never notice them!

Other than that great work!

Georgia.... :>)

Saransk1993Saransk19937 months ago

A great story. Enough drama to keep it moving but not to darken the theme.

Kathryn65Kathryn657 months ago

Simply loved reading this as I never can understand why people are so aggressive as to how we dress . Beautifully crafted from start to finish xxx

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

In these dark times it is just wonderful to have your stories to fall back upon 🥰

carolkay55carolkay557 months ago

the best story i have read in a long time what a great author so well done thank you.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

First, a massive heart felt thank you for this and all your other wonderful stories. This one is on of my favorites on this site, one I have come back to many times - and I always end up a little misty eyed at the end. You are a gifted writer, m'lady.

. . . . < Martina > . . . .

LisanotsureLisanotsureabout 2 months ago

Beautiful and heart warming story. I want to live in that reality. I only cried in 5 different spots, ha, but each time brought a warmth of love for our fellow inhabitants of this world. I needed this story today. Thank you so much for taking the time to put it to 'paper'. xo

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Authors Notes: Lots going on right now. Wanted to give everyone a big heads up. The authors got together and challenged each other to write stories in exactly 750 words. Never one to back down from a fight, I wrote and submitted six. They span several categories; 2 Sci-Fi/Fa...