All Comments on 'Flawless Ch. 01'

good beginning! keep it going

I'm already loving this power struggle you have going!

In all honesty, this could've been a brilliant story (& I was hoping to find out how this teacher might "punish" her later on) ... but then it ends so short & there's no way of knowing what happens next! Ugggh! Why didn't you continue the story?? I truly dislike reading stories without an ending (or in this case, the majority of the story being unwritten), as you never get closure. Very sad... 😥