All Comments on 'Fledgling Demigod Ch. 05'

W H Y ?

I guess I can erase the last five chapters from my memory banks, except for what you have revealed of Terra. Is he now the King with a new set of wives?

what just happened..?

Holy fuck. Why take this dark turn. Damn wasn’t expecting that.

Wht the hell I could see killing 1 maybe but both come on that was just messed up

Not a chapter to read right before bed thats for sure.

FUUCK

I HATE YOUUUU

seriously i Love and fear your tallent with words

Please continue

...Also, you repeatedly got the name of the guard wrong? What's going on with this story?

“abiostudent33 days ago

...Also, you repeatedly got the name of the guard wrong? What's going on with this story?”

That was on purpose. Sorry if it’s a bit confusing. I tried to write it where it would make sense. Her name is Lucinda, yes, but for those not in the know that she’s a female, her name is Lucifer. That slowly becomes irrelevant in the next few chapters, though.

Jesus, dude. Went real dark, real fast.

Jokes on you that's my kink. Jk but seriously talk about hills and valleys. You went nuked city my guy.