by SanityCheck
I don't know how many chapters you envision, but I'm hooked. Great writing!
Next week's chapter, chapter 19, is the final chapter for this installment.
I'm working on Immersion Playground #4: Holiday now. I don't think I'll have finished before my queue of completed stories is empty, but I AM working on it. Expect a teaser chapter/prologue in about a month...