All Comments on 'Flowers for Jan'

Good beginning. As we often read in this category, the victims are the last to know.

Well let see if the husband end it in a civilise manner or in a rage of revenge.

I hope a little bit of both. They deserved it.

All the players are there, all they have to do is act out the play. Personally I would leave the wife, after just three years of marriage she is shagging someone else? If it was perhaps, 5 years, 10 years, 15 years even I could understand things cooling down in the bedroom. But Three years? that is nothing, they are still getting to know each other. If this is how the the wife is now imagine in a couple or years time. And this is from Me a romantic old fool who wants people to stay together, but for the right reasons.

Anyway lets see what happens shall we.

While this short vignette could stand on its own, it would be a lot better if there were at least a part 2. Please keep writing.

Will be looking for chapter 2, doesn't look like wife will care about divorce, Ken may miss his, if so affair may cool, but its too late.

Good beginning. Can't wait to see what happens next.

I know exactly how he feels as the same thing happened to me. Leave her, its the only way that it works and you can start fresh.

installment, Hope you dont leave it hanging

A little short but hopefully there is more to come.

Youve got me interested. Look forward to seeing where this one goes.

It would appear that the commentators want the train wreck to continue. At present we can see the pain and loss that has transpired in this marriage. We can see the logical conclusion. But the readership wants to see where you will take it. There is a danger in giving the crowd what they want. They do not know how you see this unfolding. It may not be satisfying to see your outcome. Good luck in giving them what they think they want. Loved the story and I feel for the husband and the wife who is about to have her world destroyed by learning the truth.

This is one of those stories that is best left unfinished. The author has done a fabulous job of setting up the principle characters and the moment where he left his ring and the flowers were touching. Anything more would be too intrusive. You wrote a fantastic story. Thank you.

Looking forward to part II

it could be fine as a story with no chapter 2. Next story, why won't you expend to some more details about each of the characrtes, making them more three dimentional?

It's not out of reason to read of a woman to use sex to get ahead. Is it that she just wanted to get ahead, or is she just wanting to try out her sexuality on her work mate.The end result is the same, she winds up with her vagina full of the sperm of someone other than her husband. Damn I love to read about cheating wives, especially when they get the sex that they want and then go to their unsuspecting and loving husband. Thanks for the story....Rich

So I could only rate it 3***

Totally unimaginative. A waste of a read.

Hope Bill and Mrs Hill can burn Men and Jan to the ground.