All Comments on 'Flyin the Friendly Skies Pt. 03-04'

More please!!! So sexy and sensual!

More of this story pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee xxxx

delightful and sexy character development

super hot story too! You should be in the hall of fame for this and your other story!

when will you write more?

This was a fine continuation of the story !

Surely it will continue ?

I nearly felt that I was feeling both their pleasures, From the deplaining to the erotic shower.

I love when an author can coerce those feeling within me.

Now the down part.

The author is doing a good job with this story. But the Faux Pas's continue.

The flow of the story is sometimes broken by sentences that do not actually carry the proper meaning or feeling onward.

The word "and" was even used in places where it simply was not needed.

I so hope this author will heed my constructive criticisms to improve their writing abilities.

I am by no means any kind of writing, editorial or proofreading expert.

Hell, I failed every year of english up to and including the eighth grade. Then never attending any of the high school grade years, at seventeen I tested well enough to enlist in the U.S. Army

I have though obtained a far better than state average high grade GED !

Which I am very proud of.

I have been self educating since.