All Comments on 'Flying Blind Ch. 06'

Just got to read 1-6 and am hoping for many more chapters. PJ xx

I hope you realize that there are people like me out here that sit around waiting for your next chapter to come up lol. As always a great story that I can't wait to finish reading!! THANKS!!

I love the way you build your charachters, they are real as hell, and human to the edge of their toenails.

Well done!!

Amazing storyline, fighting off sleep for the last two chapters, but this is so worth it.

I literally stayed up all night. It's now 8:30 in the morning.

I just had to comment about Morgan and Madison at the end... I hadn't laughed so hard since... well, since I read something funny in an earlier chapter.

Anyways, love the story!

you would stop with "wordy & long" intro. In my opinion it could be infinetely longer. I so enjoy reading your art that I fear the fact that the end is approaching! C'mon man don't denigrate you work, you are one of the best.

3D movie - I laughed my ass off!

Cried a little when Madison called Hannity dad. I don't actually read your stories for the 'conflicted character' you like to put in, I'm all about great dialogue with whatever I read (and your story arcs are good). But I really bought Madison here, and especially in that moment. Wonderfully done.

Having trouble deciding which is funnier:

"It's okay," Morgan replied. "It's a 3-D movie."

or (from an earlier chapter):

"... when the dryad isn't looking, one of the cats looks up and says, 'Hey, should he be smoking up there?' "

5 stars

My Errata for this installment

Billy, Mr. Hannity got be an interview

you're mouth is on them."

This is exhausting and no end but brillant writing keeps me hanging on to end the next chapter too ....... Need to know about the last fight a d for shure an eagle is involved