by Evil Alpaca
This is exhausting and no end but brillant writing keeps me hanging on to end the next chapter too ....... Need to know about the last fight a d for shure an eagle is involved
5 stars
My Errata for this installment
Billy, Mr. Hannity got be an interview
you're mouth is on them."
Having trouble deciding which is funnier:
"It's okay," Morgan replied. "It's a 3-D movie."
or (from an earlier chapter):
"... when the dryad isn't looking, one of the cats looks up and says, 'Hey, should he be smoking up there?' "
Cried a little when Madison called Hannity dad. I don't actually read your stories for the 'conflicted character' you like to put in, I'm all about great dialogue with whatever I read (and your story arcs are good). But I really bought Madison here, and especially in that moment. Wonderfully done.
you would stop with "wordy & long" intro. In my opinion it could be infinetely longer. I so enjoy reading your art that I fear the fact that the end is approaching! C'mon man don't denigrate you work, you are one of the best.
I literally stayed up all night. It's now 8:30 in the morning.
I just had to comment about Morgan and Madison at the end... I hadn't laughed so hard since... well, since I read something funny in an earlier chapter.
Anyways, love the story!
Amazing storyline, fighting off sleep for the last two chapters, but this is so worth it.
I love the way you build your charachters, they are real as hell, and human to the edge of their toenails.
Well done!!
I hope you realize that there are people like me out here that sit around waiting for your next chapter to come up lol. As always a great story that I can't wait to finish reading!! THANKS!!