All Comments on 'Follow My Sinstructions - Step 01'

I really enjoyed this story. Extremely erotic. I like the slow burn approach you're taking, where we're going to experience Isabella slowly opening Gabby up. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I have enjoyed several of your writings but this the best so far. I love the slowness of it and at the same time it seems to quicken the pulse rate. I hope part two is not far behind. I am a se ga. fan.. Pappasleaze!

Very erotic, the slow build up really turned me on and has left me wanting while I wait for the next chapter, hurry please.

FANTASTICALLY HOT! Wished they made Videos like this!

An excellent first chapter in what I hope will be a long serial. Thank you for sharing it.

Incredibly well written and erotic as hell. It also describes the underlying power dynamic many writers miss, for example acknowledging commands, which is huge, or not doing anything as a sub without being ordered or the sub asking.

The erotic power is described incredibly well, it is like being there for me.

That was so much fun to read, I do want more :-)

Absolutely super fucking hot. Would absolutely love to watch this for real. Cunt crazed fucker, Lanc’s UK.

NIce buildup - can't wait for more!

Highly Erotic and masterfully written! Perfectly setting the scene and build up for this and the next steps of Mistress Isabella and Gabriella's journey. Anxiously awaiting Step 2!

You have tremendous ability to convey emotion/tension through perfect syntax. Wow. Loved it.

WOW! This is a great story that continues on and on

Beautifully written. Simple. Erotic…