by EnjoyBoth
I somehow wished I was in this story for real. Cannot wait to read more
"Saturday morning, I woke up with Robert's ass pressed against my morning wood."
That's the way to begin the day...
This is the first story of yours that I’ve read as I generally stick to the Gay Male category, and I’m glad to discover you. The story was great and you are talented writer. I also write stories that all end up in the gay category, although they often include other action. I look forward to reading some of your other stories.
"Robert sliding his cock into my wonton ass..."
Wonton is a noun used to indicate a type of Chinese dumpling. I believe the word you're looking for is "wanton," an archaic adjective used to describe behavior or attitude rather than a body part. Even then, it wouldn't be an appropriate use of the word.
It's errors like this that cause me to stop reading and hit the "BACK" button.
Another awesome story and it feels like this all took place in NYC area (Holland Tunnel, cold winters, etc.) and can only hope this group still exists :)