by Shadra
This must be the first time I actually care about the characters in porn. I love the way you write.
Really enjoying the plot twists you are adding to this story. Much more 'believable' than many stories on here as a result. Looking forward to the next chapter.
As a confirmed hetrosexual, and a dedicated perverted old fart, I had started to wander from the story line, but I thought this segment brought me back into full attention, I'm ready for the next twist of plot. "You go, girl!", If it is acceptable to say that any more.
entrances myself to learn what will happen next... brilliant to end the chapter with a mysterious event!
I knew the girl from the sex shop would return. Janet should have been satisfied with Rachel, because Melanie will never measure up.