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Anonymousabout 3 years agoToo short/simplistic and not descriptive enough. Definitely needs more build up and more describing how she was feeling and sounds. Try reading other people's stories to get better at it
Anonymousover 2 years agocould use more buildup and descriptions, very very fast paced. i really liked the ideas though.
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