All Comments on 'Font of Fertility Ch. 08'

Welcome back BtB. Another banger for sure, glad to see youre edging into the fertility side of FoF. Cant wait to see what you come up with next.

((Reposting in case my previous Comment gets eaten for including a Patreon link))

COME ON BREAK, WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING GIVING US A NEW FOF AFTER 7 YEARS AND NOT RESOLVING THE CLIFFHANGER!? WHERE IS ANNALISE??!?!

Hello All! Yes, I am back, and I'm back with a vengeance. This is the Probably FAQ Comment!

FAQ #1: But for real, where is Annalise? - Don't worry. Or maybe worry a lot? We're going to catch up with Annalise in Chapter 9. Plot timing required this, and I definitely didn't do it on purpose just to troll all the anonymous commenters O.O

FAQ #2: Are there more chapters, or is this a lie like cake? - There are more chapters! You can hit up my PATREON (see my bio) to check out Chapter 9 right now! That and a whole bunch of other work I've done in the past few years - we're talking a LOT of content.

FAQ #3: What about other series? - Yes, I'll get back to the Pushing crowd when I find the right story to do it. No, I will not be reviving TWE any time soon. I DO have other frying pans in the fire though...

FAQ #4: Why a Patreon? - Well folks, I've got two options. Fill my time doing freelance copy writing/editing and write erotica on the side, or write Erotica full time with the support of the community. I know what I would much rather do - pump out a crapload of hot, steamy erotica every month - but I can't do it without you folks. So, please, go check out the PATREON (in the bio)

FAQ #5: Where have you been? - Life took some weird, fun, and disappointing turns in the past 7 years. Just now I'm relatively healthy, and stable enough for the next month or two that I'm making a push at Erotica hard. If you all get behind the stories and work, then I'll be able to live my best life and write so killer stories for you all.

FAQ #6: What is I want a commission? - Yes, because so many people ask this... But for real, I'm open to commissions as well. Just email me, or send feedback with your email attached, for details.

Cheers all!

~Break.

7 year wait and no update on the girl who he failed. Disappointing. Wish i could give it 0 - stars

Welcome back!!

The shock I got after seeing 'BreakTheBar' at the top of the Sci-fi section after seven years threw me on my ass, but I'm glad to see you writing again and adding to one of my favorite stories of all time. Welcome back, and I look forward to anything you'll write.

Thanks folks! And I wish I could use a 'Tears of Joy' emote for the Anonymous user who 1-starred and got mad about Annalise without reading my comment.

So you return after a long break. But not just ignore the cliffhanger instead put it behind a paywall. All to troll the anonymous commentators like me. Congrats, you got me. Bummer, I really loved this story.

Glad you're well and back at it. You have been missed.

Can’t wait to see the next Chapter

Glad you're back.

Excellent, so glad you’re back! I could totally see him setting up a dubious fertility clinic where he gets paid to impregnate women, that would solve money and power issues

Glad to see you back!

I first found FoF fairly soon after chapter 7 was released, and I've been waiting ever since.

You did not disappoint. I would have liked a bit of extra meat in one of the sex scenes, draw it out rather than 'fade to Black's or snippets of action, but that's about it.

You've really got me looking forward to Jeremiah and the 3 girls fighting the urge to breed >:)

Keep writing and

Keep writing and I'll keep reading!

(Accidentally fat-fingered the post button before I could finish typing)

Fantastic story! Welcome back!!

You've created a very detailed world that I've gotten lost in at times ... great characters and story. Please don't leave us hanging on what happens with Annaliese; you've spent a lot of time setting her subplot up, but WE WANT MORE! :-)

Like everyone else glad your back writing just an idea maybe Lindsey or his sister know some wicken / witches( that they know but didn't know there witches till they return after break) that maybe getting a nursing degree that know what he is and join his harem and help spread his seed (part time jobs at fertility clinic)

Check out Rawlyrawls website via Google for ideas on how to monetize your work. I think Font of Fertility is interesting enough to be a book, and really good quality, so seeing how someone else is making money writing sex novels may help you out.

I gave you 5-stars.

So I guess Annaliese just dies quietly?

Cheers to all the Well-Wishers for your very kind words, and a big shrug to those complaining about Annalise - I've already commented on that above in my big FAQ comment.

@Fire_Hazard: One of the biggest complaints I got during the initial run on FoF was that the Sex was taking away from the Plot, hahah! I went back and forth a bit while writing this and the next chapter; overall, there as nothing really 'new' happening in regards to the sex - no new partners, no new situations - beyond the Magic stuff. I decided to prune back a bit so that my the Sex, when it is more appropriate, can really shine.

@NewtScamander and Rdk781: These are similar to thoughts I've had. Jeremiah is still a teen in high school though, so there's still fun to be had there before we start looking at College and beyond...

@Anonymous who suggested checking out RawlyRawls: Thank you! This is actually a big help - I recognized the name from somewhere, and their site setup seems similar to another writer I've been picking up bits and pieces from. I will definitely need to do some more research here.

He’s BAAAAAAAAAAACK! Awesome to see this story continuing updates. I like that Annalise was not mentioned on this chapter since it builds suspense and lets us get worldbuilding about seat power. That way we can use her getting free/justice to solve two problems at once!

Not bad overall. Gotta say, though, that all the sex scenes really seem to take away from the overarching story rather than add to it. The guy finds out that he's magic, that magic's a real thing, and yet there's so little about what that would mean to a regular guy. How many chapters in between when he was told about this meeting and when he gets the warning book? Why no follow up with the witch being tortured in the greenhouse? Why no warning or alert of some kind to let him know that his Judgement was being violated?

The scenes in the greenhouse felt like we were adding up to a tense confrontation of some kind. They were like little snippets to let the reader know trouble was afoot and there'd be a reckoning soon... but then it just fizzled out. Had to work in more sex scenes, I guess.

Overall, the writing is technically solid and the story has tremendous potential. I love that each chapter has a good bit of length to it so you can sit down and read for awhile. The only real problem is that I found myself scrolling through pages, trying to get past the sex scenes because I was wanting to find out what was happening in the other areas.

When our protagonist mentioned to himself that he should have asked more questions about magic when he had a witch right there who he could talk with I was like, "Yeah, idiot, you should have! Why didn't you? You just found out that magic really exists and you're near on to a god, but you didn't bother asking a few hundred questions? You didn't invite her to stay for a week or month? You didn't invite her to bring her whole family to stay with you or find some way to stay in contact with her so she could mentor you?"

That was a bit frustrating because it seemed like such an obvious thing that would actually happen. I get that this is "erotica", but I also think there can be too much of a good thing. This is one of those stories that could become a true classic in the genre.

Welcome back, glad you’re not dead! Love this story, glad it’s continuing.

I can appreciate that, and don't disagree.

It's just that with longer form chapters like what you write, having one out of the [however many] sex scenes be a little more fleshed out/in depth I find to be a nice compromise. Not telling you how to write your story, just giving my unsolicited opinion :P

Looking forward to chapter 9!

Glad your back, please write more as soon as you can!

Glad to see you back.

Happy that you're back.

Finally got round to this after I saw it the other day. Glad your back on here and continuing this story looking forward to more.

Just binged the whole saga, loving it so far & hoping you continue the story. Two small quibbles. There's a little continuity error here, Adama says that Jerry has only fucked 1 woman besides Lauren, Lindsey, and Stacey. That should say 2, Angela and Analise.

The second really surprised me, I am guessing maybe you were setting up a plot point for later, but the way it was handled makes NO sense. When Jerry & Lauren listen to the audio from the witch magazine it clearly says one of the girls who saw them is ALSO a magic user... my assumption is you plan to bring her up later, but both of them having zero reaction to that is WAY out of charater and reality. That sort of big revelation warranted a response. It's a fine line when teasing the future, but that scene crossed the line.

Otherwise having a lot of fun, more soon I hope!

I’m very glad to see you are back. This was great and I’m looking forward to more!

Great story line, please write more!!

Very glad that you are back writing. This is a good and well-written series. Looking forward to seeing this taken forward. And hopefully not with any more long breaks.

The Annalise sub-plot should be interesting to see where it heads. We will see how much Jerry will be involved in that.

I remember when this story got to its first anniversary of being on hiatus. I had thought of sending a note at that time, but never did. The story has so many ways it could go forward - there is lots of unpredictability and opportunities for it to go in various (and many) different directions - that is a good thing!

All the best.

-- Scurvy

We need you to continue this thread... It truly capitivated me and looking forward to seeing it continue...

Welcome back!

Thanks for sharing. 5* Slainte'

On my Kindle. TJ Skywind

SO glad you're back. This is one of my favorite series! Let's goooooooo!

I get it you’re sort of extending the words count but I don’t get 2 things actually though, what’s with this MORALITY clause you’re giving him, geez (for fuck sake he’s a teenager for crying out loud, he ain’t no superhero. Stop trying to make him look like one trust me you’ll make this awesome novel lose it’s value). He has powers but only doe superficial things with it. Like wtf (I’m not saying he goes on a rampage and try to take over the word but come on he is a teenager for crying out loud and this shit about always consulting Lauren before he does stuff just shows who the real MC is and it ain’t dick guy. You’re just making him out to be a whimp. And for a guy with a morality code. He passed a judgement on someone and hasn’t bothered to check up on his first judgement to see if it’s in effect smh 🤦

I’m certainly glad that you decided to continue on with this story. . ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Less morals. Except for with "family" build up that magic pool.

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Got to help Annalise!!!!

Wow! So glad for another chapter! Thanks!

What you left Annalise hanging for 8 years!! And nothing about her in this chapter!! How dare you!! 5*

uh.......Annalise?

So idiot Mc rules against the father.... who wants to enslave his children?? makes a ruling telling him to stop being a meany face!!!!!!! .. then sends her on her way home to this father...... thinking this will be cool I'm sure he will take them for ice cream as a I'm sorry???? What the fuck is going on here?

I've said it chapter after chapter to myself, but Jeremy ah is a disgrace of a teenage man. Always checks with Laura before he does anything. He was told to get someone pregnant, and all 3 girls said no. So find someone you don't like and do it.

Oh I forgot he needs a date night, before doing the deed