Font of Fertility Ch. 24

I was a few chapters back and am bingeing to catch up, and you brought up something I've been wondering about when you mentioned his mostly useless mentor... where has that little flying pest gone? Did I miss a chapter?

Uh - Harry Houdini was a debunker, calling out charlatans to use slight-of-hand to convince people they were doing magic.

Arthor Conan Doyle was a true believer, he would better fit in Esmerelda's tale...

I had the same thought as the previous comment about scaling up the rune concept over a larger territory. If you are concerned about giving him too much power too early, have him try the whole continent and find it will take too much power to implement it or have it be overwhelming to sense that much sexual energy all over the continent at once. So then have slowly scale up the size of the runes like the previous comment as his power increases. Another thing he can do is donate sperm to a fertility clinic. If Ndia could offer to store his sperm for after her current pregnancy, then storing it in a fertility clinic should work too. And then everyone wins.

You’ve hooked me on the plot 😂 wonderful story and characters. I agree that the main character feels a bit unintelligent, he should be experimenting far more. If he can cast a rune around a house to accumulate power, why hasn’t he tested those limits? A city block? A whole city? All of his territory, which encompasses North America? He knows he’s in danger and requires magical reserves to defend himself, but so far he’s prioritized so poorly. That said, I eagerly await updates!

Over all this story is amazing and fantastic, but one tiny problem MC has no affinity towards magic and also really low intellect. I mean I get it people like stories in which a mediocre person ascends to great heights, but in my opinion MC should also be written as a person who can accomplish when he put his minds to. In this story actual research about magic is only done by Lindsey which is awesome, but it also hint to Jeremiah's incapability to understand magic, he should have affinity towards languages that are often associated with magic. All these things are missing I'm not saying he is potentially unintelligent but he still portrayed as a character who has given almost God like power he has no potential to use effectivelly - a little weak.

And whiny.