All Comments on 'Font of Fertility Ch. 27'

by BreakTheBar

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cryforhelpcryforhelpabout 1 month ago

Nice twist, looking forward to how this will progress the story!

NewtScamanderNewtScamanderabout 1 month ago

I love this story, thanks for sharing!!!

HoodedHoodedabout 1 month ago

other then being to short and ending on a cliff hanger LOVE IT

SkyFlyingFalconSkyFlyingFalconabout 1 month ago

Very efficiently making Benji and Jay intensely unlikable and yet involving them even further in the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

The plot thickens.

Also, how is Leandro going to pay Jeremiah for the sanctuary? Seats don't give away magic for nothing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Uh oh Esmeralda got caught spying... Another very enjoyable chapter with unexpected twists and turns. Looking forward to his return to school and all the potential mayhem that will bring.

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Oooooo

Sounds like the new guy just created something that strikes at the heart of the Death Seat power matrix. Potentially a magical WMD against the Death Seats, but definitely against their ability to gather intel, not that attaching a spirit to another seat's shadow isn't a pretty bold affront.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Love it, and keep em coming! I was wondering what would happen to that shadow trap, and I'm glad that thread wasn't dropped!

docholliday0007docholliday0007about 1 month ago

Awesome story per usual can’t wait for the next one

Arkie77Arkie77about 1 month ago

Can't wait for the next installment

BigDog1947BigDog1947about 1 month ago

The story continues to get more depth and the character development is deeping.

Thank you for sharing your creativity with all of us. I appreciate the work you do represented with each chapter.

Jim

FrenchTomcatFrenchTomcatabout 1 month ago

I suspect Esmeralda had attached a protective spirit to him. We'll see :)

Nice épisode, my guts tell me that things are about to get messy with his friends knowing and becoming liabilities.

ClearmuseClearmuseabout 1 month ago

Great episode as always, always eager for more of this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

oooOOOOOHH, getting creepy goood.

PhoenixpapaPhoenixpapaabout 1 month ago

Another great chapter...I hope the next one comes fast.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

keep them coming your great at this series I would like a couple chapters per month but I won't be greedy

BruceWoBruceWoabout 1 month ago

Best chapter yet.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Need to release these stories faster. Stories great, just annoying having to wait a month+ per few pages. lol.

Beemer_pilotBeemer_pilotabout 1 month ago

Thanks for an excellent, surprising chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Your stories are awesome and I have throughly enjoyed each one. Hope you keep them coming.

SlofredSlofredabout 1 month ago

DAMN I so want to read the next installment right now. Great chapter and an amazing ending. What is Esmerelda upset about the ninjas or the hidden death monitor she put on him? What amazing powers is she going to let him know he has because of the encapsuled ninjas. That little sward he made has some amazing potential. It immediately negates so many attacks and hidden spies in one fell swoop. 5 Stars for an amazing chapter and keep sharing your vivid imagination with the rest of us. THANKS again.

cat833942cat833942about 1 month ago

That was interesting, nice to see the plot and story moving forward, while holding onto the sexy times.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Quite possibly one of the only chapters that I don't like. This story has been really hit or miss over the last year, which is a shame, because 10 through 18 were *unspeakably* good. Where's that author? I miss him.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Good chapter. Wish there was more that happened. Seems like this chapter was more of a build up for other things that are happening in the story. Can’t wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Honestly so here for this plot

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

You have become one of my favorites

clearlyenigmaticclearlyenigmaticabout 1 month ago

I love this series and very much enjoy every new episode. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

More, gimme mooore

dontyouwishyouknewdontyouwishyouknewabout 1 month ago

This chapter is very, very good! I love that he pulled the spirits into the sword, and look forward to what powers the sword acquired because of it. Please keep writing, BreakTheBar.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

I follow 3 series. War of the Races, Home for Horny Monsters and yours. I look forward to reading new chapters in all. Font of Fertility is the one I look forward to the most.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Welcome back and another great chapter. I am torn between this series and the quaranteam series you do on which one is my favorite. I am happy to say while the sex is good the writing and story are great. Great job!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Finally, the plot moves one step forward. Iknow the story is free as are the rest of your works. I really enjoy them. I just am like a two year old, I want what I want, and I want it NOW.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Great story, just like QT! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Another excellent chapter, I'm really looking forward to seeing how he manages to fix his magic input vs. output problem.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

I am enjoying this story...it has just the right twists and turns...AND more

SR

FollowmybeamFollowmybeamabout 1 month ago

I love this story and you are a fantastic writer!

AnonymousAnonymous25 days ago

Really can’t wait for the next installment of this series!

AnonymousAnonymous12 days ago

I appreciate your focus on the story and your imagination. Some aspects were a bit far fetched but by the time they came up we were hooked.

Well done!

AnonymousAnonymous11 days ago

I am wondering when the next book will be written?!?!? 27 chapters is good for a first book. Too many variables left open to NOT write a second book. Bring it on!!!!!

loader2626loader26265 days ago

Looking forward to more of this tale. It is very well written and easy to read. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymous5 days ago

This is truly taking off now, can't wait for the next chapter! So awesome!

rbloch66rbloch66about 14 hours ago

I'm loving the series. I've binge read it in the last 2 days, but I'm kinda bummed that I have to wait for the continuation.

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