All Comments on 'Fooled into Bed with My Sister'

I loved this story. The characters were likeable, the situation believable and the sex scenes were very well written.

Like the characters. it would make for a nice series how do the three find their way w/o causing a family Scandal. and does he marry Melissa and have Anna stay with them.

Fantastic story. Please continue it with how their lives unfold.

To every man who had the fantasy of having two women at once...its Not as easy as it sounds. Pleasing two women on an equal basis takes time, experience and knowing each woman intimately. This story reminded me of my own experiences...only those women were real...and it happened.

I really enjoyed walking down the street with two identical twins in each arm. Men would pass by and ask themselves... What does he have and I don't? Answer... Them. It almost made me more magnetic to other women from their carnal knowledge.

brilliant story.please continue on with this, there's so many ways you can go with this story. Eg did the sister fall pregnant after the first time do they all live together does he marry Melissa or goes she get pregnant so many questions to be answered, please your on a winner finish it .. 5 star plus

I know most of the stories here are fantasy. But I like reading ones that are believable. This was one of those.

Good imagination. Thx.

Wouldn't Sam have noticed the difference in feel and aroma of the two women - that they didn't act the same? And he and Anna have names - they would have used them most of the time. The bro/sis thing takes away from the story. Still, it was very good.

That Anonymous who claims to have satisfied twins really needs to write a story based on the experience.

A fun, hot tale, well-written. Loved it!

One small, nit-picky thing: it should be "piqued my interest" instead of "peeked my interest."

Definitely a five-star story.

We all should be so lucky to have a litttle sis like that. Good story.

This is one of the best stories I have read on here. I would love to read more about them...at any rate, I hope to see more sister stories from you.

Cheers!

I wish so much that was my sister

Very good story. Would like to see more of this threesome, with maybe some familial extensions (i.e. the moms get involved as well).

Thanks for all the positive feedback, I'm glad people liked it. An edit is coming to fix a few mistakes, but those take a while to go through. I don't know if I'll write a sequel, but it's going to take a while if I do, just fyi.

When brother and sister were found out before consummation of their sex act I was disappointed. But I stuck with the story and was pleased that I did. Very enjoyable. I don't see a sequel improving this or adding much of value, but I could be wrong. I've been wrong before.

wonderful read it had me wondering when they where stopped in the act but then it all worked out well great story i hope you keep writing

nice story I have done that for real. Now my sister even after 45 yrs still turns me on thanks you brought back some fond memories

Perhaps it was a bit bland for my tastebuds, I liked reading it nonetheless. It takes a hit in terms of narrative style, but overall it read nice.

Cheers and good luck!

Bard.

I really enjoyed this story. The circumstances were so believable. The reader could easily see this happening in real life. I would love to see more as making this a series like in the series "Justin Thyme." Keep writing

The four pages flew by, well done.

I really need to look at tags before I read a story. Was well written, just had some things I'm not into

The initial teasing by the girls was very HOT ! so was the Fools' day (night) in the bed.

The latter part after tying Melissa, needed a bit more polishing, but still it made me horny as hell ! Thanks for the Great Story. Expecting another chapter...Sooon...

Very hot and believable every kind of nasty fucking you can imagine. That must be what made my cock so hard and precum drip down my leg until I took things in hand and filled my shorts with cum! FUCK!!!!! You have a commanding knowledge of all things fuck and I look forward to your next adventurous fuck tale!

Very hot, absolutely awesome too! Finally a brother written like he would actually act and respond :). I think Melissa knew exactly what would happen when she sent him in there!

I'd love to see another chapter or two, even though this was a fine ending. Maybe they all move in together and brother takes their other virginities.

Maybe Mel uses a vibrator on brother while he's fucking sister, kinky!

in the direction they are now headed.

I have never called my sister Sis, nor has she ever called me Bro, but you all use it like everyone does. Stop it right now. It ruins the story. They have names. Maybe they even have family nicknames, but the are not a part of a TV street gang! Ahhhhb

Uhmmmmm.... One major problem, it's incest, its not friend and incest!!!!!! :P What a way to ruin the story!! Thanks for that 😳 😒 😑 😕 😶

Sam and Anna get married and have several kids. The End - 5 -

Please write a sequel and describe their on-going sexcapades. And give Sam some chest hair! That's so attractive on a guy!

Good story, I am 77 and have called my younger sister 'Sis' for most of her life, but never fucked her, it was my cousin I was after!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great story. I agree with losing the "Bro" though. Keep it up!

Please continue to write stories like these.......Sequel would be great. 5 stars *****

Loved everything about it. Your idea, the pacing and wording. How his sister reacts; damn that was one hot scene (Both scenes, the latter is not only hot but sweet too). Big thanks for your work pbbj

I have to say I'm impressed with this story. It was very believable and a damn HOT story... Even though I've been a party to many other kinds of sexual activities from plain old vanilla sex with my wife to gay sex with individuals and large groups, incest is the one topic that is guaranteed to turn me on, anytime. Maybe that's because I never committed incest, except in my mind. I lusted after my sister and my mother but never tried to go beyond that. There were also some older male members of the extended family that turned me on but I could never figure out why until after i was divorced and visited a few video stores.

Now my tastes are mostly interracial with males and females. And every encounter is HOT and sometimes they don't even seem believable even though they are absolutely true.

But when it comes to reading erotica or porn, nothing turns me on like incest stories that are well written and believable like this story.

I give you 5 Gold Stars....

Quite a nice story! I agree with losing the 'bro' and 'sis', as others have said. Also, please don't put soapy water / hands / fingers / appendages inside a woman, as soap can (and usually does) massively throw off a woman's vaginal pH levels. Maybe just outer lips, but no soap inside a woman.

And if you do make a second part & happen to have anal, please make sure that you wash your male character(s)'s dick(s) after having them be inside a woman's anus, before they go into her vagina.

Hygiene is important, even in erotic literature :)

Great story otherwise.

This sucked balls man! Most horrible story EVER written!!!!

I loved everything about it. Great build up and surprise twist. Great wording. I loved the brother/sister love at the end, that was very sweet, that made me smile and wish I had a sister that I could have that brotherly/sisterly love with. Whole story though was Really hot. Awesome job.

I personally enjoyed everything you've written, so real and very detailed. I have to admit I found my self quite aroused and really turned on which usually means my brain approves. Written well and could almost taste and smell and a sense of being close by. Good stuff, thanks

My sister is the best .She and I always gotten along real good.It was if we were boyfriend and girlfriend.When I was sixteen and she was fourteen we made a promise to keep anything that was a secret between us.So we were in her room one night and we were just talking.She said can I ask you something .I said yes.She said your going to tell me the truth right.I looked at her and said why wouldn't I.She goes well if you don't want to it's alright.I said to ask me what's on your mind.She looked at me right in the face and said are you a faggot.I looked at her and said why somebody said something.She said .that I've seen you and that black guy all the time go in the garage.And one thing I can't figure out is your a white guy and he's the only black guy who comes around this neighbor hood and the only time I ever see him is going in the garage with you. Plus I was standing next to the garage window and I heard someone moaning.IT sounded like someone was having a orgasm.I started laughing.I said it sounded That good..She said somebody seem like that were really enjoying. Something.I looked right at her and gave her a good kiss on the lips and she said that felt real good.Then she kissed me back .And she said can I kiss you anytime I want.I said yes I would love you to.She said I really love you .I said what kind of love.She said I would do anything with you.I said you would..I said anything.She said yes.I gave her along kiss with are tounges .And I said you want to know if I suck cock.She looked at me and said That I already know..And she was smiling.I said how do you know that I suck cock.She said I was watching you.I said when.She said two days ago.Where were you.She said in the garage up top.She said that I seen you do it all.I said what.You guys started kissing and you were rubbing him all over.Then you started taking his pants off .and I seen you start stroking his cock..Then she said .He does have a nice cock.And when I saw you put that big black cock in your mouth I almost started to have an orgasm.I said you seen me suck him off. She said yes and you really were sucking his cock off real good and I could tell you were really enjoying it.I said your something else.Your going to sit up there and watch me sucking off a black guy.She said you love sucking black guys off don't you.I said you would love it too. She said That she always wanted to suck a black guy.I said next time you want to watch me.She said yes .Then she said can I suck a guy off with you.I said yes and .if you want you can fuck too.She said really I can fuck both of you.I said if you want.She gave me a kiss and said I always wanted to fuck you.I said I always wanted to lick your pussy and lick your ass. She said you want to fuck me right.I said hell ya.She said can I suck your cock right now .I said you know what. You want to make out real good and lick each other real good .I lick your pussy and your ass .While you suck my cock.And then we'll fuck.She said ok.And the next time I suck that black guy off you can do it with me.And if you want both of us to fuck you we will.She goes .I can be your little bitch.I said you mean my little slut.she said that sounds good.Then we had great sex I cummed in her mouth and pussy .And after we were done I licked both her holes real clean.And now we're together all the time.She moved in with me along time ago.And we make love with. each other all the time .So when I went to suck that black guy off she came with me and she sucked his cock with me .After a couple of times.She said that she wanted both of us to fuck her real good .And we fucked her in her pussy and ass real good.And after we were done I licked her whole body real clean I make sure that when ever she has sex that I clean all the cum outta her .That's why we love each other because were both cock loving sluts.And we both love black cock to suck and fuck.We both love getting fucked real good .We're always smiling at each other and loving each other because were lover's now.The brother and sister thing been gone for a real long time.We tell everyone that were married. Have a good night. I know I will!!!!!!

With a slow, strong push I entered her. She was not quite as tight as Anna, though she still felt extremely good. I had to put some effort into sinking my whole length into her.

@@@ damn, how tight is his sister?! For that matter where do I find a sister and a gf that Are so tight I have to force it in and drag it out like that?! Lol! Lucky bastard! @@@

"So, is this going to be a regular thing?" I asked.

@@@ you mean, 'so when are we all moving in together? Kingsized bed of course. I guess we need a spare bed to keep up appearances. @@@

"Every guy's dream, huh?" Melissa said teasingly. "Well, minus the sister part, maybe."

@@@ definately including the sister, waaay hotter! Hell, both sisters! @@@

The next time she went down I pushed with her, making my cock slid into her throat with little resistance.

@@@ Im thinking for most women, you'd get your balls cut off for pushing her head down on your dick. Thats like a huge NO in the standard SexEd 101 manual, lol. @@@

Fuck I loved this story :). ...next chapter please!

"Naked, bound and triumphant on the bed." Lol, I love it.

Maybe write a follow-up story once the trio move in together?

Loved the story

Reminds me of the Saturday morning, parents were at the market and sister had a friend Betty stay over. Someone call out that Betty was hurt. I jumped up and ran in my sisters room. Betty was down on the floor holding her foot. I had on only a pair of boxer shorts and was sporting a semi hard on. Betty's night shirt was up above her waist and her privates were clearly visible. My sister was down near her and he night shirt was also up high, making her privates visible also. I went down on my knees and examined Betty's foot. As I touched her foot I saw her wet pussy drip and immediate became rock hard. My 5 1/2 " cock stuck out of the boxers ,then sister and Betty both smiled and each reached to feel me. I then suspected a trap/ plan.

It did not take long before this 15 year old horney boy had big and and finger in each girls privates.

I had been peeking in on them off and on since dark the night before and knew then they were two horney girls.

We continued to mess around and did have sex with both before Mom and Dad returned.

This continued well past their 16 th birthdays and still on going today. We are now in our 20's.

Thanks for the sweet story..pleasant reminder.

Loved it Great story and well told!

Loved it n want sum more my cunt was wet thru the whole story ,but i only have sisters ......we made out alot wen young but now married but still hug n kiss wen we have get together parties.....

Gave you five stars for this perfect story.

I love Incest stories and very critical of approach to this subject of many authors who like to write quikies on Incest. Incest is not an easy topic to handle. Writing Sex stories is not difficult but mixing Incest in a story requires some guts.I am in my seventies and have been reading Erotic stories for over 16 years particularly Incest. This one is one of the best. Keep up the good Work. Remember Emotions are very important in every aspect of life including sex.Incest Must be justified all the times.

Particularly among siblings.

I only rat,ed it four star because I loved the other story more. I know how that guy feels. Been there with my sister and her friend although they never ate each other they did finger each other or one did while I ate or fucked the other. I got three cherries that one day two from my sisters pussy and ass and her friends pussy. She wouldn't let me do her ass that time but did later on in life.

Five Stars.

.I did not guess the lesbian part. One of the best stories. I will read it again.

What happens in the USA? All the girls are Bi?

The story was nice until the lesbian part comes in.

Sorry, but I don't like the end.

Only 4* for you (the story was hot meanwhile)

This so needs a second part!

Kudos!

I usually don't read anything more than two pages long, but reading the first three or four paragraphs was enough to keep me going all the way through to the end!!!!!!

great story; thanks loads...

I'm male and Bi...... I have friends of all stripes, gay, Bi, straight, lesbian and some friends who like to try everything that's in the pantry, just like I do. If I have sex with a man, that doesn't make me gay because I still love sex with women.. Nor does it make women who have sex with other women, necessarily lesbians. Only when a person has sex exclusively with a person of their own sex, can they be labeled Gay or Lesbian.

Live your life the way you want to, as long as it doesn't hurt other people and let other people live their life the way they want to, as long as it doesn't hurt other people.

I can get turned on by sex of any type though some types, like incest, have special appeal to me. That may be because I was never exposed to it? Black men and women also have a special appeal to me. Though I prefer the men be older and blacker than the women. That appeal to blacks may simply be because it's so taboo but I've also found the blacks that I've had sex with to be a lot less uptight and far more open to any type of sex.

As an aside, all of the black women I've had sex with, their cum tasted like honey. The men's cum tasted essentially like any other men's cum. I think it would be a mistake to infer that those statements were true for all black people.

I really did enjoy the story........ :)

Thats made me rock hard

Definitely needs a second part

lovely story and you should write about the new living arrangements

Not very often does this work with two girls like this. You should continue this some more please ,I really would like to know how many of these stories are truly real life events , cause I know this happens all the time some where on this earth. thank you

I like to imagine that they are where ever I feel like. Like Murphy's Law say it has, is, or will happen out there somewhere (as far as I understand it. Most pop references take an overly pessimistic view on the law which states "if it can happen it will happen" good or bad; in the past, present, or future). I prefer not knowing specific instances. It makes it easier to fantasize. Plus, real scenario's like this one, of which I have heard anecdotally, usually involve things like: People in town found out told the parents, the parents disowned the kids and now all of them have been cut off from everyone they knew and love, things soured one got jealous of the other, started fighting, things escalated, etc. Like I said, I prefer the stories and fantasies.

The most alluring fantasy scenarios in my head I would never hear about...because nobody ever finds out; everything worked out too well. Ergo, "It's happening where ever you want it to."

Sorry if I killed the buzz. Loved this story by the way. Not my favorite order of events but it held a lot of surprises. I'll have to reread it to do it justice.

Now I'll step off my philosophical and pedantic soap box and allow all of you fine gentlemen (and women) to continue to enjoy the riveting, erotic ramblings of this resplendent electronic resource.

PS- Alliteration is awesome.

PSS- If you REALLY want to hear some stories like this they sometimes pop up in daytime reality shows like Dr. Phill and in crime/mystery shows like 48 hours. Pretty obvious if it's gotten to one of those shows it's not a happy ending. :,-(

fyi-the other stories like these I've heard are through the judgemental rumor grape vine littered with insults and disapproving huffs where only like 50 or hundred people ever actually hear about it because it loses steam before it spreads further.

Personally I bust a good 🥜 Reading this

Enjoyed reading the story and wondered how often stuff like this happens in real life.

I couldn't stop reading, fantasy or real it was really hard to stop enjoying the mental picture you started and I was horny all through out the story. That usually don't happen, but, the story was that believable to me. You keep writing, I will keep reading.

It was amazing. It doesn't need to be followed but that's not my choice. Damn hot. Hot hot hot! Keep writing. :)

wow you could turn this into a really nice series if you wanted with the three characters ending up together as a couple maybe sam can marry mellisa and then anna lives with them and they all act as one couple. great job.

And it Does happen more often than society realizes... My sister and I have also - been there, done that and it was Special on many levels.

Btw - I would like to know how many Women read this and appreciate these stories, And how many have or would participate in Adult incest. Those of you out there please comment. We men would like to know.. :)

Well it reminded me of an incident

I wanted to fuck my younger sister but i was nt too lucky

We both had gone for a family cocktail party n i was drunk to the core we both were home alone that night i wanted to screw her badly but ws nt sure if she would reciprocate n was scared too .

My sis had gone to change in the bathroom n i went to her room in the pretext of changing my clothes.did nt latch the door intentionally as soon as i got to know she was coming in i got naked n my dick was rock hard she pushed the door n came in seen me nude n turned away in a shock

Then i wore my shorts n came out of the room n she got in n locked the door i was fucking embarrassed n i msged her saying i forgot to lock the door she msged bck say i did nt see anything :)

But the truth is she had seen everything .i wish she would hv given me a chance that night

I am sure she must have fingered her self that night

All of your stories are incredibly hot.

holy fuck! that was amazing! To the point that it actually had me thinking back to what friends me and my own sister could've had this sort of relationship with!

unbelievable good story very entertaining and at no point did I want to rush forward!

fantastic writing!

I wouldn't be surprised if I suggest my sister reads it without telling her why! fantastic work!!

I'm truly impressed!

and beyond aroused!

So damn good -- I haven't read such a well written story with brother-sister and close friend for a while. The action was great, the story line has so much potential left. Hopefully, Sam will start screwing Melissa as much as his little sister; when all 3 are present. Girl on girl as Sam eats, play and screws them both. So many ideas yet to try. Cannot wait for more -- thank you.

when it's something they want to do.

Nicely Done

U write very well.... love to have brother and sister enjoying each other.....

loved it good story

I really liked the first half, nice slow pacing, realistic characters, quite believable. Halfway through, everyone turned into sex-maniacs. But it makes sense.

Here's what really happened: he fell asleep during the movie. What happened after the movie was so ridiculous, and so flattering to the guy, him dreaming it up is the only reasonable explanation.

Such dreams are quite common, and harmless. True enough, the author could have made the twist more clear, seems like most people didn't notice it.

I wonder what really happened when he woke up.

it would have been better if she just kept him for herself. Just my thing I guess. Or if her friend knew what she wanted and so had worked it all out to get them to hook up, not as a participant herself.

Amazing, just Fucking amazing.

ending sucked--no more 'sis' 'bro' -alread know he are

Seriously

Very sexy, fantastically exciting. I loved it , kept my heart pounding!

Yes, outstanding -- Anna, Melissa and Anna's brother should screw each other and then setup a plan to do it all the time. The girls should have their own time to play too. Yes more chapters would be great, as their are so many choices. Thanks.

Just, simply, WOW!!!

I would love to have been in a situation like that but even though I had 5 sisters it never happened. I thought he was going to fuck his sister while she bent to eat Mellisa's pussy, they could have made a daisy chain.

So Jake and Melissa could openly Date and eventually get a 2 or 3 bedroom place, then Anna could move in, as a 'roommate'.

Later J & M get married and Anna still lives with them, Both girls get preggers, but they tell everyone that Anna's - lets say daughter - is the result of a 1 night stand with a guy she doesn't remember.

After that Jake 'plays' daddy to his 'niece' while Anna plays loving Auntie/2nd mom to her Nephew.

Long time after the kids learn the truth, and get in on the 'Family Fun' with each other and their female BFF.

That was a very arousing story, I would definitely like to see another chapter or two from this group.

Arousing indeed. Easy to see why this story rated so high in Literotica rankings. Would ❤️ to see this expanding into more chapters.

It would have been nice if Melissa could have been black/chinese/philapina etc for some extra texture contrast.

Sisko ja siskon tyttöystävä muuttaa minun kanssani kolmen huoneen asuntoon. Nussimme kolmistaan sängyssä.

So hot. I love to fuck my sisters. I hope they have my babies some day.

To "Options," a hot story like this and all you can say is "needs texture?" oh my giddy aunt.

Anyway, great story. Shorter than what I normally go in for (I'm a samslam fan), but absolutely got my engine going.

Seems to me that if you're going to complain that someone's use of English is childish and immature, you ought to avoid criticizing their use of a word that doesn't exist ("physodelic") by telling them that they meant to use a different word that doesn't exist ("physedelic").

And you definitely ought not to suggest that your own generation "had a great deal more maturity and definitely not a lazy" (whatever that latter means) when you're too lazy to reread what you've written and see, first that it doesn't make sense, and second that you've said that those people "were to mature to..."

Don't you just love it when assholes who say you can't write English prove in the doing that they can't either.

“Childish and immature” being used as a thin veil (not even trying to really, seemingly proud of it) for an old-school, Jim Crow argument. But even putting aside the ignorant and archaic racism in this rant, I have to point out the fundamental premise on language here. Language is not set in stone, a dead and cold thing, it is fire and alive and constantly evolving. In short, bling bling, mo fo.

How well written, commencing with Melissa scheming to get the siblings to have intercourse & then becoming so hot herself watching the action she joined in a threesome. The scenario made my breathing quicken & I was wrapped in the action.

How can I transfer this "fiction" into "fact" and become a leading player? Incentive to write such an event myself. Thanks for your work.

My younger sis and I were home alone a lot in our teens, so we had lots of opportunities to explore our sexuality. I was always horny for her and would eventually talk her into heavy petting and fingering her slit. I had no clue until she told me that my cock was as big and thick as dad's, that dad had already introduced her to the art of pleasuring a man. As much as she wanted intercourse, she said, "Not with a big daddy penis like yours," As a compromise, she would suck and jack me very passionately!

Looking forward to the next time or another episode

That is every guys dream. What more can I say, I hope there is another chapter.

Loved It!

actually 2 people need to end up with big sexy pregnant bellies and big fucking milk filled tits. the kind of tits a guy can suck all day

fucking a horny pregnant woman is the fuckin' best sex

fucking TWO would be fucking paradise

im so horny...wow fantastic story...shall there be more?

knocking them up and golden showers

shit, am I really that perverted?

Oh fuck yeah!

Really enjoyed. I hope there would be more, but it doesn’t look like it.

I was so jealous as I had an erection the whole time reading this. Wishing I had a younger sister but only brothers. Not the same with all boys.....but still kinda fun. Great story...

Excellent