All Comments on 'Fooled into Bed with My Sister'

Shirt rolled up to sleeves ? That's kinda fucked ! Nipple freak ? Umbilicus freak ? Weird !

KerSploosh!

Fucking hot and wild

Five Stars, and more! Wow! Thanks for the memories... That Special Love never goes away... we've been there.

Beat love story, I hope you do a sequel

i happened to find this story on april fools lol

Make it a series

Wow...an incestuous bi-sexual sister and her horny friend....

What could be better?

I rated 4 stars 'cuz the first part of this long story was predictable.

Fun read though....

Thank you, great story.

Well written story compared to most on here. It could use more description during the sex acts.

Very convincing story. Loved it...erupted twice. Melissa is quite the slut bringing them all together like this.

She needs a special reward.

That was very horny ,

I love my brother too .

He has a wife and yes I do join them ❤️

Lovely sexy story xx

Pretty hot reminds me of when I saw my sister pussy my sister left phone in living room and went to her room to take a nap her friend called and asked me to check if my sister was awake when I entered my sister room which door was open I saw my sister laying face down wear short silky shorts her beautiful ass was up and I could see her pussy I went to look at her face too see if she was awake and whispered Monica are you awake and told her friend she was asleep it looked like sister was pretending to be asleep I was scared to get busted looking at her pussy so I started masturbating to her from the door then I noticed her hand underneath her and I could see she was fingering herself she had door open so I figured she wanted me to see her so I went back into her room for a better look then I gently started feeling her ass making my way to her pussy I know she could feel me so I started fingering her she started moaning turned around and pulled her shorts to the side I went down on her took her shorts off so I could eat her out better than I put my dick to her mouth to so she could suck my dick I did want to cum yet so I pulled dick out her mouth before I came and spread her legs and fucked her with out condom

Love it … love it … love it

Thanks for a spectacular read

👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽

This has to be one of the best stories I’ve read on this site tbh I hope you continue writing stories

Fantastic. I had a hard on all the way through. Let's read more of the antics of this threesome.

Just beautiful 🤗 😘 😘 your writing is amazing .. please continue

Truly I work of art

PLEASE write more!

You have a real talent and I hope you will share it more with me and others.

I've read and reread this story multiple times over the past two years. I still think that it's one of my all time favorites. The only thing that I don't like is Melissa's manipulation. But they eventually resolved it and decided to become a throuple. Sam's little sister and her BFF are both bisexual and they both are in love with the same guy, so they share him without jealousy. Just beautiful! 5 stars 🌟 🌟 🌟 ⭐ 🌟

5/5

Very hot. Wish there was another chapter.

I’ve read many stories here about guys having trouble getting laid. I think about the situation here at the old folks home where I live & see the same situation.

Now somebody explain to me why bordellos are illegal. I don’t mean anything like human trafficking, but just a shop where guys can get laid & women can earn some extra cash.

I honestly can’t think or one reason that we can’t have some everywhere.

B. S.

Great, hot 🥵 story! A true 5 star story. I loves it.

Bill S.

What happened to Melissa's turn with his tool?

This was magic.. my cock is rock hard now. All I need now is a yummy cock to make love to my mouth and unload his love juice until I swallow every drop xoxo

I enjoyed the story, very hot.

(My only peeve is that you mentioned putting soapy fingers into a vagina. That's a NO-NO. You never, ever do that, it burns, is uncomfortable AND can potentially cause a yeast infection)

Loved it,

Neighbor teen moving

Loved it wish it was my sister was intimate with her never had sex

KOWABUNGA!! I have to admit, that HAS to be the absolute BEST story I've read here hands down! Thank you and keep up the GREAT Work!!

Time to leave and not tell ANYONE where you went - FOREVER.

Needs another chapter

This kinda reminds me of how my bosses daughter fooled me into getting into bed with her at her 20th birthday party. It was Halloween themed because her birthday is on Halloween so I dressed up as a pirate my bosses daughter dressed up like a pirate vampire princess captain so I thought I would say happy birthday next thing I know she asked if I could help her with a birthday present for her mom my boss well I had been drinking well next thing I knew she and I were. On the bed making out on her parents bed I was wearing protection but obviously since she can’t drink she must have poked holes in the condom because it broke right as her mom who was drunk came into the room and said that it give me a grandchild for my birthday next thing I woke up and I get up almost every buddy from the party was gone next thing I know I heard noises coming from her older brother room I open the door and there was my boss and her son having unprotected sex and next thing I know I heard her and him grunting and her saying something about this is going to be one big baby. I got a ride home from a fellow coworker that was next to the bonfire with the bosses boyfriend well 9 months later my boss and her daughter were both pregnant of course I took responsibility for my actions even though I pretty sure it was planned from the beginning when your six foot 9 tall . I married my boss daughter the next June it was awkward because we had to have a double baby shower and her boyfriend never knew that they baby wasn’t his . My boss went into labor at work so one of me and my employees helped her give birth to a bounceing baby girl in the bathroom we called for a ambulance to get her and the baby to the hospital the baby looked like a female version of her older brother/dad . Me and her daughter had are baby at home with the help of a midwife it was a boy and I said to her thank you for my son but no more alcohol of course right away after my boss got out of the hospital she was coming over so much with the baby girl to play with her nephew that now that there three they are so close that any body that comes over they think there brother and sister instead of auntie and nephew.

Some interesting, creative twists. Didn't see that coming. Good job.

I just imagine the future if the sister and brother go there separate ways if the sister got pregnant from this the baby being like grandma and grandpa why do I look more into my uncle then my supposed father if she was to date someone and make them think they baby is there’s I know a cousin who thought that and turned out her uncle was her father

Good long buildup. Good character development and hot as hell

5 stars all the way

Great story. A young man's paradise

awsome and hot as hell

Holy shit I came 3 times while reading this !! I wish I had a brother that could fuck me like that :(

I ENJOYED READING THIS STORY! I SEE NOTHING WRONG WITH FAMILY HAVING SEXUAL CONTACT WITH EACH OTHER AS LONG THEY ARE ADULTS AND THEY BOTH AGREE. A FEW OF MY COUSINS HAVE GOTTEN MARRIED AND HAD KIDS AND I NEVER HEARD OF BIRTH DEFECTS, OR ANYTHING WRONG WITH THEIR HEALTH. SO KEEP WRITNG AND I FOR ONE WILL CONTINUE TO READ OUR STORIES!!! THANKS!!!

Part 2 please and thank you!

Wish I had a sister like that HOT

Hot

Melissa is a TOXIC BITCH of a best friend!!!

There was no need for the brother to even have sex with toxic slut Melissa!! She spoilt the story.

I enjoyed the story but as others have said would have been better without Melissa

that was good just like me and siter i have 4 sis i have eat all of them out keep up the good work

A dream of every young man with a good looking sister: sis and her beautiful friend in a threesome.

Great story! Well thought out and written with great characters and sex scenes. I appreciate you and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Was good until the reconciliation with Melissa. Could have left her out after apologizing and took another route with brother and sister.

It was a cute and fun story. Not HOT but very playful and very enjoyable

The story is sexy and has potential. But when it took the bend to be merely about sex I lost my interest. A brother/sister story without love and commitment is dissappointing. Especially after the author hinted at the sister really being into her brother, not letting her friend have him- only to later happily share him? To me it's very inconsistent.

that was truly a amazing story...it was the better of all the bro/sis stories i've read...thanks 4 sharing..!

FRIDAY NIGHT FUNKIN GIRLFRIEND EATS HER DAD'S PUSSY OUT

It was really good till you put the two girls together. Shit. You think every guy gets turned on by two women being sexually together???. I used to. Till my fiance' cheated on me with another woman. After that, all I got was pissed!!!!!

Type of story I like. All in the trio had sex and feelings for each other. Too much hate and envy in the world to have it in stories. If you want that, read the magazines about real life celebrities. 5 ⭐

Fun, Hawt, Romantic, und Zexxy!

11/10!!!!!

Not going to hate on any character as it is a fansty story I don't agree with bringing in the girl however I understand and can see why you did

Are people hating on my girl, Melissa? Unbelievable. A story with incest in it doesn't have to be just incest. 5 stars

it felt wholesome

Chill the hell out this is his story that he made and when your writing a story you can do anything and so he did what he wanted and this story is a 5 ⭐️

5star rating, great story from start to finish and for those over sensitive readers go read the stock market chart..and stop making stupid comments

Okay...for the last (2) anonymous commenters (three days ago)...TAKE YOUR OPINIONS SOMEWHERE ELSE, PLEASE!! THAT KINDA CRAP IS NOT NECESARY, NOR APPRECIATED HERE!!

I found this tale to be quite touching...so it startedoutwith an April Fool's prank that went a little sideways...

The relationship worked out, for all involved; and, now, they are gonna move in together, it sounds like. Good For Them!!

**5** Stars...🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠

Would be 5 stars if he dud not fuck Melussa

MELISSA IS A BITCH, A TOXIC SELFISH WHORE

Just excellent.

What a story

And great writing skills !

I love the subtle but exciting manner he reveals to the reader that the girls had been into their own sexual escapades. That revelation opened up the rest of the story with a firestorm !

A brilliant story.

What fun and games between the three of them. A most enjoyable read, thank you for publishing this work here.

WTF, why why didn’t you finish this story off. You’ve got the makings of a brilliant storyline here. This is one of the main things that pisses me off with writers like you, they rarely finish what they start, especially when the story is good.. It’s really fucking Annoying

bro why u so mad lmfao

A bitch friend, Melissa. The worldcan do without bitchy slut friends

Excellent! A real fun romp. I hope they get along in their new place

Loved it, I'm dripping wet from reading this. I would love a sequel. Thanks for the amazing orgasm. The characters were relatable and likeable. The scenario was believable. I enjoyed the details of intimacy. Ten out of ten in my opinion.

Very fun story. Try to avoid overdoing the Bro / Sis dialog. No one talks that way and rather than keeping the fantasy going it makes it sound clumsy.

good and well told and told and told ; already !

I mean it was a 4 pager and could have been spiced up by a delicious 69 episode, no?

ah, 69 ! “ Breakfast of Champions”

I really liked this story. Plausible. Creative.

Well, I'd say a perfect start. Yes, you have to find someone to edit for you to fix some grammar problems. I'm guessing, you write fast, and do not proofread. But, you have to finish this with 3 or 4 more chapters. You have never written about them being safe, so we are guessing neither woman is on the pill, or has an IUD in. That probably means your stud is making babies!. Is that what you want, so he marries Mel, and sister move in with them. I don't remember if any of them is employed, but the girls could go to a local Uni and get nursing degrees, while stud-o get a tech cheer from a local JC, but there is some jealousy between the girls, a doctor has the hots for sis, and Mel shows up with the 'crabs' (after baby is born). Bro divorces Mel, she leaves him with baby, family goes to Vegas, and he marries Anna. Maybe not so extreme, but give us a tangled web, with lots of sex. Remember this is what Anna wanted all along. Good job. Keep writing.

XYZ

Captures the hollow conversation of everyday life. No insight, no growth, nothing.

pbbj, you are here and I wonder why didn't you continue this.

3 of them living together.

2 of them are pregnant at the same time.

but don't involve gang bangs and another male party. it sets me off. Please

Extremely well written and definitely dick hardning

ok story, but...typos, misspellings galore...

Yeah, good job. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.

I never had a threesome let alone with my sister. It was more intense than I thought it would be. You took the whole interaction to a satisfying conclusion. I wish was Sam that lucky guy.

Bisexual girls are absolutely amazing. I was lucky enough to have been married to a Bisexual for 25 years. Sadly though, she also has a latent mental illness that she has refused counseling for. I wanted to work things out with marriage counseling but she refused and left. I have no regrets. I stayed faithful and stood by her until she crossed a line that I couldn't tolerate. I know that I did the best that I could and that the eventual outcome was inevitable. I'll always have the memories of when she shared me with her girlfriends.

@cercamons: you’re watching the wrong kind of porn then. You can find intimate porn on many sites dedicated to it. @Pbbj, you haven’t posted anything in four years. That’s a shame as your writing is quite good. Perhaps you realized it and turned pro? You know, like a stripper who becomes a pornstar….

Very good story ! ! Had to stop reading to keep from cumming a few times,..

Best ... Story ... Ever!! Well done, and thank you!

I'm not sure if you're still here, but here it goes. To start off, I really enjoyed your story.

I wonder how things would have gone if they tied up Melissa, but Sam had refused to give in to her desire. It would've been nice to see her pissed off, or for her to admit that she didn't like him in shame. She'd be in agony that only Sam could relieve, and she couldn't forget the "pain" she caused. It's a only a thought.

Great work! Hope to read more of your work and others like it soon.

I agree with Anonymous. I wish there were videos of your stories. You have kind of ruined visual porn for me, making me realize how impersonal and lifeless almost all of it is.

There really needs to be a video of this.

One of the best stories I've read so far on this web site. I agree wholeheartedly with Anonymous below. We would all like to see new stories like this one. I hope you are well and still monitoring the comments on your stories. I've added you to my follows list. Please start submitting again. 5 Stars!! Wish I had more stars to give.

If you ever start writing again, I would love a sequel!

Very good. Grammar, spelling didn’t ruin the story flow for me.

Well done!

And for a big change, this story was complete, not leaving me wondering.

Still left room for a follow-up story which I’d like to see, but not critical to complete this one.

All of the above. A great read for an erotic story. You have a nice talent for writing..

it had ended when he and Anna got together

adding Melissa wasn't needed.

I liked the slow build and semi-innocent tone of it. Great story.

If this story is true, I sure as HELL envy you and your escapades with your sister and her friends.

Makes me wish I had a sister to create an identical story.

Now excuse me while I take care of business by myself, dammit.

It wouldn't hurt my feelings to read more of your three-some stories with your sister if you've had any more experiences.

What a story. Love to read more !!!!!

Really enjoyed your uniquely beautiful bro-sis love story (with sis's best GF as a very nice counterpoint. It should stand alone, without another Chapter to detract from it. Thanx for the great Read!

This was a fantastic opening chapter.

The buildup, suspense and background development were wonderfully done - for a series. Instead we get one chapter, the majority of which is buildup, and then a very good resolution to the first part, but then a precipitous drop with nothing to follow.

Did Anna and Melissa conspire together to prank Sam into having sex with Anna,or were they seperate pranks,but seeing how both Melissa and Anna were both lesbian lovers prior to pranking Sam I think they both plotted together.

Sadly I think Sam was the single victim between Anna's and Melissa's scheme,but to make up for it,both girls basically gave Sam their bodies and love to make amends.I also think all 3 decided to get a place of their own so they could be a threesome couple and share their love and desire for each other.I just hope they could start a family and have both Melissa and Anna carry Sam's babies,preferably all girls so when they come of age both Moms could share Sam with their Daughters,and raise a new generation of incestual bisexual nympho sluts eager to pleasure Daddy and Mommy's constantly.Long Live Incest Love.

Enjoyed the unexpected (at least for me) turns and plots.

Excellent