All Comments on 'Football Bet FTW!'

loved it!

When my roommate has her boyfriend and his buds over to watch a game, I usually go out. But I like his cousin a lot, and he never has shown much interest in me. I think I have a suggestion for her.

This has sports, humor, and sex. Can it get any better?

A wonderful story. The only flaw - if it is a flaw at all - is that the Halloween connection is rather weak. But who cares with a story like this?

Yes, betting with friends on sports can be... fun. :) It was nice to see how close Jack and Lori were as friends. I appreciated their joking back and forth and how much FUN they made the sex.

Which is as it should be.

Again, great job!

and you scored again. Waiting for the next game

Was starting to think that I'd love to see a picture of Lori...but you did a great job of painting a picture of her. Very good story...Great job..

THE REDSKINS ARE THE WORST. THE STORY IS WELL DONE,BUT THE FORESKINS BLOW!

Another well done fun read. Go Skins!!!!!

...except it is a shame about your team. This is what Gisele and Tom are like upstairs at " The razor" before each home game. Just no self control.

This was fantastic and I'm not even a football fan. I've read all your stuff on the site and this in one of the best; it would make a great series, can't wait to see how you would work the identical cousin into the story line.

Thanks for sharing your stories with us.

Really, really enjoyed this. Would love to read a few more chapters, you really brought these people to life. Hate your team but one can't have everything.

Please continue. I am sure you can add a chapter or 2 to this.

Great Story! Enjoyed it alot as a skins fan and not Dallas. Would love to see more chapters and find out about Jack and Lori's future together!!!

I really enjoyed the story, it was a ncie mix of romance and sex. I do have one question though, What does FTW stand for?

Thanks for the comments and feedback.

FTW is a gaming abbreviation FOR THE WIN!

It's also commonly used as an enthusiastic way to end a comment or phrase that something is both great and assumed.

I think it was supposed to have originated on Hollywood Squares - Paul Lind For the Win. It's been hijacked by gamers.

In some circles it's used for "Fuck The World". Not my intention :-)

But the Redskins REALLY!! That made it tough read for me .... GO GIANTS! Well at least Eli came through with the winning points for you. Now how about a follow up story where your honey's identical twin gets involved.

Loved the story but you can be kicked out of Texas for being a skins fan.Go Big D!

Fun and sexy story. So playful, and still so HOT! Another winner.

Wonderfully written!

I enjoyed that TxTallTales... Very fun to read.

Pretty girl dresses up as cheerleader and turns football into a sex game. Why thank you god

Your story is a fun read. And living with Redskins fans, I can appreciate the story even more.

That was a great story. I loved it very much. Wonderfully written and described. Keep it up.

Great story! Keep it up.

i laughed, I cried, i loled... Truly a wonderful story and since i'm a football fanatic, it makes me believe that someday someone will see a sexy woman here too :)

5 thumbs up! If i had that many....

Beer, sex and football--is this a great country or what?! Loved it. Good tight writing, good hot sex, believable, and it felt like Texas. Jack is a cool dude, and Lori is great.

for a Redskins fan. All I can think of is how well you'd be able to write if you were born in New England!

Your stories are well written, but, after reading several of them, they are all starting to sound the same. Different settings, but the same middle and ending.

a damn good story, well told and erotic.

What a total piece of fiction. Redskins with a winning record? Deadskins winning a game 52-7? Puh-leeeease. Eli coming through in the clutch? Pure fantasy-land. I'll give you props for the Cowboys losing and the Eagles winning, though.

In all seriousness, great story. The ending with them role playing and Lori in her cheerleader outfit was great. Outstanding! Well done!

You have got to be the best author on here. Accidental nudist cabin is the best story I've ever read. This one is not far behind. Great story.

What a dream girl!!!

And yet, she would be my dream girl, easy.

Great writing, thank you.

One of the hardest things in the world is to find the perfect companion to watch football games with. Looks to me as if Jack has a winner there!

And a word of advice to Jack: she's the kind to stick with for the long haul: never boring, physically fit, not likely to get flabby or saggy, and definitely never boring. Go for it!

As for her creator, you've defined one of the most appealing fictional women in Lori. Good job. Now let's have more stories about Lori and Jack as they journey through life together, perfectly paired and lots of fun.

I thoroghly enjoyed this story. As a Giants fan living in DC for 25 years, I can sympathize with your character being in Dallas. It sucks lol. And the romance was fun.

I've always been that vulgar, loud, burping, one of the guys, tomboyish firecracker that always knew the game whether it football, Nascar or baseball. Boys never took to me so I kicked their asses instead of getting to kiss them. I still am a vulgar tomboy at heart; just love to spend Sundays in my sexiest lingerie, making guacamole and yelling at the T.V. It's nice to know somewhere out there, there are men who do appreciate women like me once you get through our tough skin! Great story!

That. Was. Hot! Well done!

it was quirky and sexy. Loved the whole tomboy-sexy girl character. Look forward to more of your works.

Great story but what happens after the bet/night come to an end? They seem to have the makings of an excellent couple,except she seems a bit glib and less likely to commit. This story begs a sequel if only because inquiring minds want to know how their season plays out. ~ 5+

As another commenter said: almost as perfect as the accidental nudist cabin. HTTR!

This is a great story and I enjoyed how you developed the characters. This story deserves a sequel or epilogue. I hope there is one in the works.

Great story and I loved the role play at the end.

This is a masterpiece. I loved reading it!

First football...then sex...then football and sex?!? Get out of my head. Loved it!

PS. Tomlinson? Um Pittsburgh not Philly no? 😊

Tomlinson played for San Diego. Bettis played for P'burgh. Good story, I like your writing. My comment was for the last guy who commented. I am from Colo. Thanks for the Elway & Elam plug.

Come back was me coming back to find this story so that I could mark it as a favorite. I loved the interaction between the main characters...and the development of their relationship. The story was funny, sexy, and held my interest from beginning to end. Loved it!

I'm glad I found it again. Now, I can add it to my favs and reread it any time I want. I really enjoyed the story. The development of the couple was honest, and as it continued to progress it was sexy, funny, and such a treat to read.

Than a barrel of monkeys ! Sexy, funny, well written. Your fertile brain comes through again. Now what am I gonna do? I've read 5 of your stories so far and each one becomes my favorite. You are so much fun to read. I would pay to read your books.

Wonderful imagination. A-5.😊

The only issue I had with this story is it was about the Redskins and I'm a Seahawks fan...Hot as hell, and that line would be what I'd say too...If only I could find someone like Lori IRL, I'd be a happy man. None of my GFs gave a shit about football, nor were as wild as she is.

A very well deserved 5* and favorite

Perfect....Story was awesome, Hot from beginning to end. MY KIND of STORY! Thank You

I thought it was going nowhere, then the games started, I liked the finish.

You really are a talented writer. That story was so much fun to read. I also loved the roll playing and playful sex at the end. It put a smile on my face that was hard to get off. Thanks for sharing your incredible skill. Easily a 5. 😊😊😊😊😊

Enjoyed

From the u.k.

Just read this brilliant story, it felt like I should watch the super bowl, I'd be definitely watching the cheerleaders and think of this story, frigging loved it, please bring out more chapters, I wanna see how it goes for them, I can imagine them being a secret couple at the games in front the guys on game days.

A well crafted story that draws the reader in, builds up the sexual tension, and delivers an erotic payoff.

Wonderful!

Loved the story. Gave it 5 stars. I loved how playful Lori was in bed. They really seemed to get along well and i am sure this is the start of a nice romance between them. Great play with football terms. It is wonderful when a woman loves the game as much as her man does. So many women just do not try to understand the game and how much we guys, at least some of us, really enjoy the game and would love it if our better half enjoyed the game with us. Great story!!!

I loved the character development, the playfulness, the fun banter. One of the best I’ve ever read!

Great story I loved it very much please bring out more chapters of this.

The constant football refrences during sex was a bit annoying but otherwise great story. Needs another chapter. 5 stars

Just loved the sexual undertones and the exciting back and forth. Very nicely put together with a great idea throughout. Enjoyed it through all the way!!!

Damn. One of the best I have ever read.

Liked it, but being English, did not understand all the AF stuff, also, could you please tell me what RICTUS means ? Not in my dictionary. -- Thanks.

great football word sparing. would have liked a few paragraphs about the next weeks games and gathering of friends when they slowly realize you 2 are now a couple.

Damn, this story needs a 2nd part... i'd love to see them become a couple...

I agree with Duncanita, Ready for more Lori and Jack!!

This was a fun story. Plot development and character development were first rate. You wrote it well. It was nice to follow along with the betting and bantering -- always knowing they would get together, yet enjoying the ride right along with them. Well Done!

To Anonymous, re rictus, get an OED.

As a girl who loves to watch football - This was freaking AWESOME!! Great job!!

A perfect story. A very rare five stars from me. I just wish we could have seen what happens next.

I was sorry that it ended, I wanted more. 5*.

Yes, Duncanita's got it right! Needs more! Want to see how the boys react when they watch another game and he sits with his arm around her!! Good story!!

you've got some great stories, TX, like the last boy scout ch2 and a few others. but this one had just too much witty dialogue during the sex that made it very distracting for people that don't watch football. (i clicked because i like stories with bets/dares.)

i will say that i did like how she basically had to convince herself to make and somehow accept her own bet. that was very good writing that delved into the psychological aspect of the characters, which is awesome.

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

Your best story yet. It was relatable, good humor; a thoroughly fun read.

WOW!! Not allowed to vote a ten, so how about a 5 twice. samm4906

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As an EAGLES fan I really enjoyed the NFC East scenario and the sex was great! Used to love John Riggins and the Hogs too. Just great with the fantasy football thrown in. Thanks.