All Comments on 'Football Practice'

by Cliff11

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abc101abc101over 12 years ago
great story

please write more

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
A HEN IN THE FOX DEN

this could be a twist on an old theme. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Two and a half

Seriously! I gave you a five for a great intro but this was really only about half a story. It needs a lot more student/teacher interaction and some sort of conclusion to even be a chapter. I see there is a chapter 2 also in this series but cfnm must not be a tag. What a let down!!!

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