All Comments on 'Footlong Pt. 01'

Your writing is always great, and this looks like another good one! Thanks for sharing it!

What’s fun story. Adds a new meaning to the old adage, ‘foot in mouth’. Love your work and the breezy style of writing no moralising and retrospection just getting on with the screwing such good stuff.

You get my vote simply for good use of vocabulary and in particular the word “peregrinations”, not sure if that’s in your usual everyday usage, but I like it!

Very enticing details that kept me interested throughout. Agree with hubby, but in a more motivating way, “ hey baby, your talent in writing is waster on Literotica. Maybe use it as a sound board for feed back asca precursor to making a byck or two here and there.” Good luck snd start with ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️