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FootwriterFootwriteralmost 5 years agoAuthor
The initial erotic experience revealed!

Jerry was bursting with feeling and desire...he just couldn't quite bring himself to do the deed...to, pardon the expression, "pull it off"! He will, however, be forced to do that in the future...as spouse Loren makes life for Jerry harder and HARDER! Thank you all for reading and for your comments! FW

FootwriterFootwriteralmost 5 years agoAuthor
The beginning!

This was the initial embarrassment and failure for poor Jerry. He was laden with desire and lust for his exhibitionist wife, Loren...but couldn't quite pull it off (pardon the pun)...and overcome his embarrassment! It's going to come back to chide him...and Loren is hardly finished with him...and what she puts the poor man through! Thank you for reading and your comments! FW

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Ballet flats get a bum rap

It was nice to read a story about my favorite female footwear; black ballet flats with generous toe cleavage. Comparing heels with this type of flat is no contest. The flats win every time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Very subtle...but erotic...and "moving!"

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Super. The guy has a flair for the subtly erotic!

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