Footsteps

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Two left on the mountain, simply shot where they lay sleeping. Four more at the house miles away?

Why?

All because of a lying unfaithful wife?

What was the point?

The jailer sighed. It was not for him to say.

He brought up the website, began to type. It was a long slow process, he did not type well.

"Poor bastard." He muttered.

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A few days later, the jailer reached up and wiped a tear from his eye, reread what he had transferred to the website. The spellcheck program had corrected most of the errors, he thought.

He touched the button that read, "submit."

"Poor bastard", he muttered again to himself.

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jimjam69jimjam69over 3 years ago

Could happen! Bet it has happened, Many times in some form or fashion.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Great story

Just goes to show that all women are lying, cheating sluts when they think they can get away with it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
great story

loved it

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
THIS IS NOT ENTERTAINING

I read these stories for a bit of fun and escapism...this is just total failure in being fun to read....

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 11 years ago
i wont say i understood this, but it was engaging in terms of trying to figure things out .

The simplest explanation is usually right . I don't like that option,however so I'll try to think of something more complicated & choose that one . Good story though. Once i wilfully opened it up to interpretation, it was even better. TY MGM!

Average_WriterAverage_Writeralmost 14 years ago
Very, very GOOD.

MGM? This is a very well written story, of course everyone knows you can write, and write wellbut this was one of your best, and I have read a lot of your stories. Again very well done.

PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpetealmost 14 years ago
This was the one MGM.....

....nicely presented perspective and just amorphous enough to intrigue.Pro writing all the way thank-you.

bruce22bruce22almost 14 years ago
Yet another Good Story

This one gave me the feeling of being out of focus from beginning to

end.Of course the fact that he was ten minutes from execution appearing early in the story may have taken the punch out of it. MGM,Thank you very

much!

AzPilotAzPilotalmost 14 years ago
What a great viewpoint!

You held my attention all the way through. Inventive and ingenious come to mind real quick. Thank you.

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