All Comments on 'Footsteps'

lovely, simply lovely.

like most authors you cannot get lie and lay right.

laid must have a noun after it

lie lay lain lying

lay laid laid laying---must be followed by a noun

hope this helps.

Best story yet! I love how graphic and real it is...so turned on!!

You have real talent! Please keep writing, a perfect blend of erotism and feelings.

Just gorgeous. I love this.

and delicious. A real treasure. A perfect portrait of tender loving care. Maybe should be read before this newbie's 2nd story "Kept." But no matter, both are must reads for the romance fan.

Thanks, take care and be well -- hcl