it would have been better if you made it longer and added sex with the friends and explained what happened to them and if the doctors found out what was going on with the side effects
I want to write more stories floating in my head, hoping they are shorter. Had 3+ years but cancer is back and treatment is starting. Hopefully this time can be rid of it. 11 Sep 20. Trying to get back to writing. It's slow going, as after 8 weeks of daily radiation treatment ...