All Comments on 'For a Living Ch. 01'

Looks like the fellow lost his steam half-way through the story.

Introduction is good, but it could be a little bit longer, emphasizing more on the economic situation and expressing poverty more. The turning point is really good first not accepting the situation then getting used to it and enjoying it.

Can't wait for the next chapter...

awesome story!! pls continue. also pls try to humiliate the mom as much as possible, in front of her son.

You need to continue the series. I'm curious what happens next.

Where is the next part itis 3yrs but no post

That's an awesome story..

n where's the second part?

I like you to continue writing.

its pretty good as first part, try and make it into a series.

You've done great job with the first part.