All Comments on 'For Love or Money'

Lovely story!

5

Pleasant little story. IMHO, it could've used a little more oomph. For example, Holly could've found out about the arrangement the Jim had with Gail. Still would've gotten back together at the end but with drama in between.

Loved every second of this. 5 🌟

Pleasant story! Thank you!

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Be well!

A nice take on the “Taming of the Shrew” motif, with very likable characters. However, the heart and soul of a TOTS story is the process of converting ‘I hate you” into “I love you”. For a really satisfying story, one would like to see several cycles of “problem—>solution” before success. In this story, she goes from turning him down for dates to asking him to bed in just 8 or 9 short paragraphs. I would love to see a follow up story which shows us a lot more of the details of how the MC wins over the fair lady..

Nice little story but no real emotion or conflict, made it all a bit flat.

Very enjoyable story.

Nice concept and well developed story. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Good story but I like a little more conflict before the happy ending.

pretty good story, but please get an editor or proof reader.

no such thing as a dd213, it is a dd214

i know elections are getting weird, but never knew that there was an electoral engineering degree

never knew it took a guild to give a tour, thought it was a guide

With the legal system in the US today? Nobody should *ever* get married again. Live together, make vows of fidelity? Sure. Lace it up and tie the knot, legally? Hell no. It's a license to steal. Only an idiot would voluntarily enter into that in its current form.

Too quick and easy, read like a Cliff Notes version of the Shrew” when I wanted to read the full thing. Lacks in depth and emotion.

I enjoyed your story. Gave it a 3/5. Would have been a 4 maybe even 5, but like people said it lacked a little something and became fast paced for me as it jumped into dating without details of effort he put into it.

Good story, RG! Thanks!

I was certain that Holly would discover the arrangement to build dramatic tension! I agree with others that I would have liked more conflict and substance in the romance leading up to the marriage. I, too, would have liked more careful editing. I noticed that Holly became Molly at one point. You’ve created some interesting characters, but they could have benefited from a bit more development.

With that all being said, it is certainly a pleasing story with an interesting premise and a nice happy ending. I’m glad I read it, so thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.

Cute

Pretty sure “electoral engineering” was what got Trumpy elected, do you perhaps mean electrical?

What’s a DD 213???

LOVE slap-hapy-papy #9

5 stars. You're right, this story should have been in the romance section. However I loved it anyway. A great story thanks.

Is it weird that I ship Jim and Gail? Maybe Iam an oddball.

I enjoyed the tale and laughed at the electoral engineering.

No fooling or farting around. Just a good romance story.

To anonymous, yes, it is weird that you ship Jim and Gail, whatever that means.

A lovely story, I think that I’m getting soft I’m my old age, I like romances.

I know a lot of people like this story, but while I like the concept, it just isn't well written. The entire romance part is missing.

The start of this tale led me to believe it would include some future marital drama. I was/am sorry to say I supposed wrongly. Thus the 3 stars.

Not sure I'd call that an arranged marriage. Not in the traditional sense.