All Comments on 'For Passion Conquers All Ch. 04'

by TheRisenStorm

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killer12killer12about 11 years ago
Hot!!!!

I am loving this story. That Dream sequence was great writing and well worded to make it very erotic.

Keep up the good work

Dawn262Dawn262about 11 years ago
Good Work!

This is a fine story. Well thought out. Beautiful. It is good to see quality erotica here at Literotica!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Love it!

This story is so hot. Mike is such a nice guy and Eli (ella) sounds so hot.

Really want to read about what happens at the party and further in the relationship.

Please write another chapter. :)

randomaliasrandomaliasover 9 years ago
MORE

This series is fantastic! Really well written! I really hope you write more of it! ^_^

DustyDevilDustyDevilabout 6 years ago
Excellent start

This is a good start . From the looks on the publication date it has been awhile since you have published. Please consider finishing up with the series. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Another disappointingly unfinished story. A total bummer for such a great story.

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