All Comments on 'For Want of a Nail'

good start to what may be a great series

Hopefully a great start. Hope for a continuation!

I hope this is a series

This looks to be a variation on Gamblnluck's "Slave Camp" series?

I’m not a comic book fan and didn’t get all the references but you pulled me into the story quite well. Magda was a true superhero and surely made a fantastic man out of Junior. I liked this story just the way it is and can easily imagine what happens next. No need for further chapters. Instead go write more exhilarating stories!