All Comments on 'Forays in erotica'

Oh Viridia This is a sexy first piece. It will be great to see longer pieces and maybe see inside you characters heads with more depth. There is something great going on there or is it inside your head:)

Thank you for sharing what you have written

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Wonderful again. Four tales, each different, no cookie cutter or carbon copy characters. It makes my chest feel heavy and my head swim, each short tale pushing different buttons. Once more this is high eroticism. Each tale goes where it needs to go and most leave the end up to the reader's imagination. Keep them coming viridia.

Thank You,

-Master Vyle