All Comments on 'Forbidden Ch. 01'

More please. What happens next? Do they regret what happened, but have to continue? Is he always on her mind even though she tries to push him out? Does Priya feel more confident because of Matthew? Does she go out and buy a sexy outfit or swimsuit? Do they go on secret dates during the day? Do they get caught eventually? Does Matthews wife join in? You have an amazing story here please continue it. When they have sex again will you describe their bodies a little more. Does Priya have long black hair? You mentioned her boobs but how big are they? She has a slight mom bod go into a little more detail. Matthew works from home is he a tech guy, an accountant, or something else. Is he tall or short, built or scrawny, Does he have a dad bod? Now that they have had sex does Priya find him super sexy? You have great story and I can’t wait to read more.

I like what you have here. Please give us more. You have so many directions to take this story and I need to know where it goes. Do they regret what happened but have to continue. Is Priya more confident now? Does she feel like a a desirable woman. Does she go out and by a sexy outfit or swimsuit. Does Priya go out and buy more clothes that show a little more skin. Does she come around more while her sister is home and does her sister notice a change in both of them? Will you describe both of them I picture a slight mom bod for Priya but I want to know more about her curves are her boobs huge or is butt big and firm or is it her hips that make her stand out? Does she wear a full face of makeup next time she sees Matthew? Doe he like it or hate the new look? Is he a big strong man or does he have a dad bod with decent strength? Is he a scrawny guy who is fit but does not put the work in? Matthew works from home what is his profession. Is he a tech guy or an accountant. Nerdy and quiet or a quiet guy who watches sports? This is an amazing story and I can’t wait to see where you take it

Looking forward to seee where this relationship goes.

really took your time describing his thoughts, their kissing and all their mutual sensations. Thank you for such attention to detail.

I thought with the way they were going that he was going to lose all control and remain inside her. Maybe next time?

Well done for being willing to extend the exquisite experience. 5

That was how the story closed and that is an excellent question. I look forward to knowing much about these characters (and their heretofore ignorant spouses) who expended heat pent up over years in sumptuous, graphic detail thanks to X-factor's skill. Wonderful start and I'm impatiently awaiting encore tryst.

Ergo the obvious score

Full marks *****

Amazing description! Liked the length and speed of the events. Like Mathew, I had to hold back multiple times during the course of the story. It just got better and hotter towards the end. However, expected something nicer or different at the end. Overall, a great read!

Brilliant start