All Comments on 'Forbidden Ch. 01'

Very good. Very, very good. Very sensual. Thank you.

Very good. Very, very good. Very sensual. Thank you.

It started off well enough, but seriously? No 18 year old guy talks like this. He sounds like he's been stealing his mother's poorly written romance novels. Try to make the dialogue match the quality of the story, because otherwise this was fairly enjoyable.

A young man's dream come true! Well done!

*****HOT AZZ read. Thanks for sharing.