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LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 3 years ago
Priya is Doing Double Duty

During the day, she rocks her brother in law's world and with the twilight gloaming serves her TV addled hubby chow. If Priya heats up as well in the kitchen like she does in the bedroom, Raj is in danger of getting a paunch. Fun, fun fun until killjoy spouses notice that something is amiss. Excellent writing.

Ergo the obvious score

Full marks *****

Comentarista82Comentarista82over 3 years ago
Quite the chemistry

between Matthew and Priya. I'm waiting for Priya to get so enraptured by her plowing that she locks herself around him and he inseminates her AND she WANTS it too; she's already giving those signals while in the throes of the act.

On the other hand, poor Raj just sinks lower in the ratings. Seems quite Magoo. I will be interested to see how you paint Matthew's wife, as perhaps she and Raj will make the ideal couple. lol

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