All Comments on 'Forbidden Ch. 23'

need to F in the ass and get her pregnant or else story will drag same every chapter

Just wanted to leave some feedback.

I sort of was the Matthew a few years ago. Was working in Bangalore 2012. But in my case I had a few priyas.

I mean, if you are a white dude you are not hurting for women in India

Passionate, loving, and engaging, the drama continues in this riveting story, all the more so thanks to some excellent writing by the author.

I agree with all the comments, loving and passionate story between the two couples. However, before as one the comments eluded, it can continue to drag repetitively or just add a shocking moments of anal, pregnant planning, but GREAT story love it. continue to expand.

Ah ha! The readers' impatience has reached it's peak and the timing of these comments is wonderful! Can't wait for you to absorb the final five chapters. Coming up next...

Love it. No, continue it longer as possible. why last 5 chapters, why not continue it longer series, its lovely. Your Doing Great.

I totally agree! keep continuing best story here. dont stop. so many outcomes each chapter. love your stories

knock priya up,

just terrific! another one x-factor. keep it goin agree with other we want MORE

Great story! More

Excellent! Wow

Another One x-factor. i like the relationship between priya and matthew so many ways and more chapt to come from it. love this series please continue

lovely couple. description was great

so many ways to with this story please continue. Great Work.

Outstanding!

Another great story x-factor. One of my favorite reads