All Comments on 'Forbidden Feelings Ch. 01-02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great story.

I'm glad to see you are reposting your stories. I enjoyed reading them the first time and I still find them to be just as great the second time. Hope to read more soon.

bluewillybluebluewillyblueover 12 years ago
Really enjoyed this story.

Thank you for a wonderful story, you did a great job, look forward to the follow up!

imharmless69imharmless69over 12 years ago
Great

Great to see this story back!

2275jr2275jrover 12 years ago
so very erotic two women kissing

this stories has got my whole being so turn on with such horny feelings. brilliant writing fantastic story. can't wait to read the next part if this first part is any thing to go bye.forbidden feelings ch 1

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Hot story, but...

Where I'm from, you will get your arm chomped off trying to feed a hungry girl just some strawberries and chocolate syrup. Especially if they're in it for the full day of "activity", she might want to think about throwing some carbs or some protein on the plate next time...

Otherwise, great story - very hot!

*~W2W~* (aka, Ravenous Texan)

DumplingDumplingover 12 years ago
WOW

Dont have time very often to read a Story, but mhhhhh your a good Writer ~ love it :)

WistfulSeniorWistfulSeniorover 12 years ago
I'm So Glad Your Story Is Back

I absolutely loved it the first time around and the second time is just as good. You build the story in such a slow, loving way - never letting your reader out of the moment. Time just fly's by while reading your story. Thank you.

UncertainTUncertainT7 months ago

Nice beginning, looking forward to seeing how this goes.

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