All Comments on 'Forbidden Fruit Ch. 01'

more soon please

I loved your story, fantastic by combining D/s, incest, Bi and the promise of reverse gang-bang/orgy.

A great idea combining the domination and incest/group aspects. Hot. The only real criticism would be the speed at which the mother and friend come up with the scheme. I think it would have been more interesting to see the friend 'seduce' the mother into accepting her proposal. It would be sexier to watch the mother explore her relationship with her friend and let the anticipation of the impending new relationship build.

But too rushed. Would be better with some more character development and more sex. This was more of an outline of a story than an actual story.