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All Comments on 'Forbidden Fruit Ch. 21-25'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
This shouldn't be in the insest forums

If you are done with the family stuff

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
??

Is the incest over? If it is, you should take it out of this forum.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
keep going

but for the love of all incest and erotica.....put it in the right category .....GEEZ!

It's not rocket science to do the right tags.....you keep digging for goods but the readers want diamonds now eh! Totally wrong category

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
When is Vickie getting fucked

Serious dude. This is good but it’s no incest

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Dean/Brad

The change in POV in Chapter 25 is made quite confusing by you using the wrong name several times ("Brad's parents", "Brad finished his breakfast" and also, weirdly, "her mother").

Sonnyw55Sonnyw55over 3 years ago
Wrong Category

This a great story however, its under the wrong category. The past several chapters has evolved more about Brad and Friends of Vickie more so than Brad and Vickie. Brad is a male whore!!!!!! Lol

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