All Comments on 'Forbidden Fruit Ch. 31-35'

GoldRogue

Your plane is making to many left and right hand turns. Also as was pointed out to you before even though the first of your story started to lean towards Brad and Vic it has ventured into non-incest for the moment. I know you want to keep folks coming back here for the next chapters but you should really post your non-incest parts in the correct areas. It is interesting story for sure and I am waiting for the time when Brad and Vic finally give into each other and fuck the night away. keep up the good writing but lord fly your plane straight the passengers are getting sick :) ... Yes I like using the plane metaphor it makes me smile :) :) :)

Even John Watson made it to this series. I bet Sherlock Holmes would too before Brad fucks Vickie.

Listen GoldRogue. If there’s gonna be no Brad-Vickie tension just let us know so that we could skip the rest of the chapters. We are done reading your high school fantasy.

Excellent story and I’m sure it will completely fit in with the section it’s currently in eventually.

Man...... this story doesn’t belong here