by secretsessions
Great storytelling and the sex was hot! Thanks for sharing.
Top quality tale, well done & condolences on the loss of a special woman in your life.
This could be made better by breaking up the long paragraphs and adding more dialogue. It confirms what we all suspect: Mom was a hottie in her day.
Nice idea. Why all the 'unusual' grammar and spelling? It was difficult to avoid feeling that the protagonist was deliberately being made to look uneducated.
Very erotic!
But you could use an editor or at least a grammar/spell checker to pick up obvious errors.
Thanks for the hot, hot story. It’s nice that you could make so many women happy - as well as yourself of course. Curious if you ever settled down - guess I’ll find out as I read your other stories.
I gave up trying to read it because of so many spelling mistakes please use spell checker or something it’s so frustrating to get into a story and then have to give up because you don’t know what they are on about