All Comments on 'Forbidden - Stand Alone Bonus Pt. 01'

I would like to see Colton have more control over his anger and aggression. Maybe writing ✍ it into the next installment as a moment of maturity inspired and driven by Heather and their mutual love. It can be done without having professional intervention. You're already drifting in that direction anyway. 5/5

A great story, is there any more?

5/5

Great story. I would like to see colton confront father about the abuse . Maybe the father comes looking for her and colton proves he would die for her if needed without actually dieing. Plus the step mom needs to step in and dump the father.

Heather needs to seal the relationship with colton with a child once she is finished school.

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please continue