All Comments on 'Force Breed by Mushrooms'

Wonderful story idea, but please work on making coherent sentences. It ruined to story quite a bit, and I hope to see more stories with better grammar.

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There seems to be a bit of a language barrier that could be solved with a proofreader or editor.

Your work is good, so that shouldn't be too hard to find someone.

While I enjoyed the story the language and grammar issues cannot be overlooked.